"Somehow the image of the future John Connor Jr. receiving his first semi-automatic rifle from an over indulgent Aunty Cameron wasn’t nearly as frightening as it should have been. Definitely a brain tumour."
You are my new best friend. ;)
And, "“Because,” Cameron spoke quietly…seemingly more to herself than to him, “When she’s angry, she forgets to be afraid.” - this is lovely. A very pure Cameron-esque compassion. <3
Wow, excellent writing; I was really pulled into the drama but loved the wry humor. Also, so insightful... :o Pretty awesome and I'm totally waiting for more.
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Definitely a brain tumour."
You are my new best friend. ;)
And, "“Because,” Cameron spoke quietly…seemingly more to herself than to him, “When she’s angry, she forgets to be afraid.” - this is lovely. A very pure Cameron-esque compassion. <3
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I'm really trying to keep up a good balance between drama and comedy, so I'm glad it's working,
~Bones
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The furious cat in my avatar DEMANDS more chapters or your doom will be assured. Do not anger Furious Cat!
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I love your little additions of humour! they are great gems! somehow only Jesse would say "Is soething burning?"
and i like how you handled Sarah and Cameron discussing the problem of John, Riley & hormones.
I can't wait till the next chapter!
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Glad your enjoying it!
~Bones
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