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foreverxkisses June 8 2009, 07:23:21 UTC
"Somehow the image of the future John Connor Jr. receiving his first semi-automatic rifle from an over indulgent Aunty Cameron wasn’t nearly as frightening as it should have been.
Definitely a brain tumour."

You are my new best friend. ;)

And, "“Because,” Cameron spoke quietly…seemingly more to herself than to him, “When she’s angry, she forgets to be afraid.” - this is lovely. A very pure Cameron-esque compassion. <3

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2headed_turtles June 8 2009, 17:27:28 UTC
*laugh* Thanks! Always good to make a new friend. I'm glad you're enjoying it,

~Bones

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auriflamme June 8 2009, 10:22:53 UTC
Wow, excellent writing; I was really pulled into the drama but loved the wry humor. Also, so insightful... :o Pretty awesome and I'm totally waiting for more.

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2headed_turtles June 8 2009, 17:28:33 UTC
Thanks!
I'm really trying to keep up a good balance between drama and comedy, so I'm glad it's working,

~Bones

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terrorfex June 8 2009, 11:59:17 UTC


The furious cat in my avatar DEMANDS more chapters or your doom will be assured. Do not anger Furious Cat!

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2headed_turtles June 8 2009, 17:30:19 UTC
Well I wouldn't want to upset furious cat...I guess I'll just have to keep going *G*.

~Bones

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terrorfex June 8 2009, 17:56:53 UTC
Furious Cat is PLEASED by your cooperation and will feast on the flesh of the innocent in tribute to you.

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lhfan21 June 8 2009, 13:00:13 UTC
I really like how Sarah and Cameron are interacting with each other. Great job. Update soon.

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2headed_turtles June 8 2009, 17:30:57 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad that's working, their interactions are a lot of fun.

~Bones

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demoka June 8 2009, 13:55:41 UTC
aw... I hope Cam tries to hug Sarah soon! Her slow caring actions are sweet, but I hope Sarah will twig a bit sooner

I love your little additions of humour! they are great gems! somehow only Jesse would say "Is soething burning?"

and i like how you handled Sarah and Cameron discussing the problem of John, Riley & hormones.

I can't wait till the next chapter!

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2headed_turtles June 8 2009, 17:34:51 UTC
Mmm...there may be some hugs in their future...but I can't guarantee Sarah'll be happy about it *G*.

Glad your enjoying it!

~Bones

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