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genericambition in 2amtomorning

The Last Kiss Before the Goodbye

Nov 11, 2011 23:16

(Explicit/Probably offensive.)

( The Last Kiss Before the Goodbye )

genericambition

Comments 6

mind_detonator November 12 2011, 10:32:34 UTC

I love this. Is it bad that I'm imagining me and the boy in these roles?

genericambition November 12 2011, 10:42:00 UTC

lilymyone November 16 2011, 19:05:31 UTC

Very nice. The explicitness is justified in the swirling thoughts and sensations present. The details are just about perfect for the size. Very well done.

genericambition November 18 2011, 23:27:00 UTC

Thanks very much :)

clirando November 26 2011, 15:08:55 UTC

I kinda love this, actually. Classy smut, which always makes me think of Anais Nin, but with a dry, snarky self-awareness her writing never had.
'...had left him with a deep, rising intonation' is very good.

genericambition November 26 2011, 15:19:23 UTC

You're too kind :)
Thank you.