How to apologize - a Due South snippet

Jan 27, 2008 20:08

Fandom: Due South
Characters: Diefenbakker, Fraser/Kowalski
Summary: After an undercover situation requires some fast talking, an apology is needed.
Challenge: forgive for ds_snippets
Rating: G
How to apologize )

due south, drabble, slash

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spuffyduds January 28 2008, 03:33:57 UTC
This is my wolf, highly skilled in taking down bad guys with a leap and a growl? Now please let us into your criminal headquarters.”

Heee! Oh, this is darling. Well done.

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2_4_joy January 28 2008, 05:40:22 UTC
In other fandoms, I see an image, struggle with dialogue, and end up with angst. But for dS, I sit and wait, staring at the prompt, until one of them starts talking. I just wish they'd speak to me a little more often. *sigh*

Thanks for reading.

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simplystars January 28 2008, 03:47:19 UTC
Aww, miffed!Dief is absolutely adorable. And Ray is so wise in the ways of apology. :D

Cute and clever!

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2_4_joy January 28 2008, 05:48:30 UTC
I <3 Dief! He's so cute and so much fun to write.

Glad you liked it.

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akamine_chan January 28 2008, 04:51:25 UTC
Fraser turns to their newest packmember, grumbling and looking for sympathy.

Interesting, how Fraser has slipped into Diefenbaker's role for this one.

He snorts, and powdered sugar flies everywhere.

I really like this image, sticky powered sugar all over. This brings back memories of eating beignets at Cafe du Monde in New Orleans years ago...

Wonderful imagery here. Good job.

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2_4_joy January 28 2008, 06:05:55 UTC
Mmmm, beignets. And chicory coffee. You're making me homesick. :'(

I hadn't really thought about the shifting roles, but you're right. To be honest, I got home from work with an hour and a half until the deadline and wrote it in twenty minutes with my husband going "stop playing on the Internet so we can go eat before all the restaurants close" in the background. So I haven't even read through it for editing, let alone actually thought about it. Figured I'd just post it before the deadline passed and edit later, if necessary.

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akite January 28 2008, 12:09:28 UTC
Hee! Cute story. That Ray is one smart cookie.

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2_4_joy January 28 2008, 16:20:33 UTC
Thanks.
And I love your icon.

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viciouscats January 28 2008, 12:34:19 UTC
Hee! Adorable! :)

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2_4_joy January 28 2008, 16:21:11 UTC
Glad you liked.

Thanks for reading.

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