Beneath the... (Chapter 9)

Jun 17, 2017 08:22

Title: Beneath the…
Rating: R for words.
Characters: OT5 (All Arashi members as brothers)
Genre: AU, drama, family, angst
Disclaimer: Only the plot is mine~
Summary: 2 years ago Osayama Satoshi was involved in a terrible accident that made him lost partial of his memories. Even though he survived the impact, he becomes mentally incapable and has to ( Read more... )

series, rating:r, arashi

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nijimirai June 17 2017, 02:22:04 UTC
Oh!! Satoshi and Kazu are almost there~!!! \o/ haha was so surprised and touched when Satoshi offered his money to Kazu, wow :')

HAHAHA the "candy"!! Oh, my! "Jun is a pro at this, you should ask him later when we get home" XD (to be honest I never knew it came in different flavours, too....)

but the ending of this chapter was so sad... poor Sho!! I can't bring myself to hate him even though he acts so harshly, but he has reasons and I think he just needs a hug (or like 10 million hugs).

p.s. don't worry about the 'late' update, I've once taken 6 years to update one of my fics... and it hasn't progressed from there... >< so I already think you're amazing for updating so frequently~!!

Thanks for the update and looking forward to tomorrow's :) <3

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24iza_run June 18 2017, 03:14:38 UTC
Satoshi seems still has his 'older brother' traits even after the accident ^^

Tbh I never thought I'll write such a joke XD But we need something light since this story is getting heavier.

Yeah, Sho's becoming that more like due to stress. Even though it's not the correct way to act, it doesn't mean he has a bad intention :( *hug him too*

P.S: Writing story is actually difficult so I can relate it too you T^T Thank you for your understanding. I hope you can consider writing back when the inspiration comes :)

Just updated! Thank You SO much for reading and commenting!

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shozimoto June 17 2017, 02:37:42 UTC
Thanks for the update.. Its alright, sometimes there are things that we can't avoid.

Btw, Sho....

Looking forward for the next chapter. 😉

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24iza_run June 18 2017, 03:17:00 UTC
Thank you for your understanding :)

Will Sho be okay...?

Just updated! Thank You SO much for reading and commenting!

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koi_choshi June 17 2017, 04:05:37 UTC
Oh no! I hope Kazu and Satoshi can find Masaki soon! I wonder what Kazu will do. And now, it seems like Sho is on the verge of breaking down. I think Kazu will be able to fix everything (I hope)

It was amusing, the "candy" box. :D Something lighthearted in this dark story. Plus, Satoshi got to see Kazu smile.

Thanks for this!

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24iza_run June 18 2017, 03:20:18 UTC
Will them find Masaki back? It will be answered in the next chapter ;)
Sho is keeping too much to himself and now he is overwhelmed by that :(

Hahaha. Yeah, I think this story is a bit too dark XD That's the point of Satoshi's character too. To make the plot less heavier while progressing.

Just updated! Thank You SO much for reading and commenting too!

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devil29bich June 17 2017, 04:18:34 UTC
Hope Satoshi would have remember how to use one lol!
I hope Sho's not having a heart attack.
And don't worry about the update! I still need to find time to update my fics😊

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24iza_run June 18 2017, 03:21:56 UTC
Hahaha. I don't know about that XD

Looking by how bad Sho's condition is becoming, let's hope it won't be one :(

Just updated! Thank You SO much for reading and commenting too ^^

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mae74 June 17 2017, 05:48:47 UTC
Oh I hope they find Masaki soon and can start to repair their relationships. 🙏

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24iza_run June 18 2017, 03:23:40 UTC
Even if it's not entirely easy, they will try to no give up :)

Thank You SO much for reading and commenting! The new chapter has been updated!

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