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Waiting Room

May 25, 2014 20:08

Title: Waiting Room
Author: Cybertooth Tiger
Rating: G
Summary: Jack waits for someone. Possible spoilers for S9.4.
Characters: Jack and the someone.
A/N: I don’t own anything from 24.

( Spoilers for S9.4 )

Comments 10

marinw May 26 2014, 10:03:29 UTC

24 fanfic from you! I didn't even know this com was still up.

This was so good. Poor Jack, the things that must be going through his mind. You really explored that well.

At least she was alive. Walking away had accomplished that much.

Oh, that line really got to me!

cybertoothtiger May 26 2014, 16:45:18 UTC

You commented in both places, bless your cotton socks! And such a nice comment, too.

Yeah, I haven't been on here for ages. *Gets all nostalgic*

marinw May 26 2014, 18:15:26 UTC

I wish I had on cotton socks but it's so cold here I'm still wearing wool. tmi .

I suppose I should watch the relevant parts of Day 6. When Jacks meets Heller in London it should go something like"The last time we met I put a gun to your head and threatened to take your catatonic daughter. But we're good now, right?"

cybertoothtiger May 26 2014, 19:38:18 UTC

Yeah, I need to watch that, too. Heller seems to have forgotten his little pep-talk to Audrey in S4, in which he tells her that "He was just doing his job. You have to believe that he had no choice." and "We need people like Jack."

Although, to be fair, slaughtering some Russian diplomats wasn't exactly in Jack's contract, so. He only gets a pass when he's doing crazy violent stuff on behalf of the gov't, not in his extra curricular activities.

mulefa June 24 2014, 12:46:04 UTC

Great - thanks for writing :)

cybertoothtiger July 16 2014, 14:49:00 UTC

Thanks, Mully! Good to see you, even if I only just saw this comment. How are things over at 24nMore?

mulefa July 16 2014, 15:30:33 UTC

*waves* I never lived at 24nmore. I'm still living at Meg's armbell site which has changed address. It has fewer visitors than in its hay day but it's still in business :)

cybertoothtiger July 16 2014, 17:46:03 UTC

LOL, I never really spent any time over there, either, so I lost track of who was there and who wasn't. Can you give me the new address of Meg's site? PM me if you don't want to post it. I had a good archive there!

agentrez July 15 2014, 00:57:04 UTC

How the hell did I just discover this fic? It's terrific. Sad, but I think it captures Jack's state of mind when he saw Audrey very well. I think it's very in character that he would second-guess his decision to walk away from her at the end of season 6. Great job!

cybertoothtiger July 16 2014, 14:55:47 UTC

Thanks! I'm sad that both he and Mark were right. Poor Jack.