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theclexfactor January 19 2008, 15:34:47 UTC
Wow, even without the drawing, the visual was so vivid that I felt like a voyeur. However, the drawing is beautiful. You both did a really awesome job. Please tell me there's more of these, I feel like I'm reading an anthology of short stories.

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jij January 20 2008, 11:18:58 UTC
Wow, even without the drawing, the visual was so vivid that I felt like a voyeur.

*glee* I had a lot of fun imagining Clark's apartment and all the little details (as well as Clark himself, of course!) The pillowcase was a total bonus, I never would have come up with that, lol.

It's my turn to write the story next and she'll illustrate! I don't think they'll be connected, but we shall see if they feel it at all. :)

Glad you liked it!

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arianstarr January 19 2008, 16:26:14 UTC
That was really lovely! Both the artwork and the story. :)

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jij January 20 2008, 11:22:06 UTC
Thank you so much! I hope I did the picture justice, it had such a lovely thoughtful quality to it...

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northernwalker January 19 2008, 17:15:57 UTC
Aw, this is so sweet! /pets Bruce

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jij January 20 2008, 11:28:19 UTC
*grin* Stalker!Bruce is very fun to write! How could I resist with that picture sitting on my desktop wallpaper for inspiration... :)

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dm_wyatt January 19 2008, 17:20:10 UTC
This story was so evocative, I love the details and the pre-slash quality to it... and the art is special.

I loved the last line too.

What a wonderful treat!

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jij January 21 2008, 01:07:02 UTC
The art definitely got me thinking about the details of Clark's apartment...which was a very fun undertaking. :) It was a great prompt! Thanks so much for the feedback...

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carolandtom January 19 2008, 17:30:32 UTC
Awww, this was so good! Both the art and the fic are marvellous! I adored the scene: Bruce making sure Clark was alright, watching him sleep, the little bats on the pillow... So sweet and heart-warming. I loved it!

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jij January 21 2008, 01:08:06 UTC
Bruce watching over Clark (even when he might not watching) is one of my favorite images! *grin* Glad you enjoyed it!

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