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It (Axel/Roxas, #1)

Apr 25, 2007 17:54

Title: It
Author: libekory
Claim: Axel/Roxas
Prompt: #1 ["absent"]
Warnings: None, really. Practically genfic.
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts belongs to Square-Enix, Disney, and subsidiaries. No profit, no copyright infringement intended, for entertainment purposes only.

( He never used to miss it. )

axel/roxas, axel, roxas

Comments 27

sparkism April 26 2007, 03:31:14 UTC

Aw, that was so sweet. In the sad sort of way.
(I hate to use the word bittersweet, it makes me twitch. xD)
Wonderfully done.

He slung an arm around Roxas's shoulder and was thrown into the nearest wall...
WALLSEX.
*cough*

libekory April 26 2007, 03:33:30 UTC

MAYBE LATER.

♥ Thank you~. :3 I really can't wait to see what everyone comes up with. XD

sparkism April 26 2007, 03:37:02 UTC

WOOHOO

I know! I just put in a claim here even though I have like, forty-million other things I need to write. xD I'm so silly.

libekory April 28 2007, 05:35:28 UTC

ALREADY WRITTEN, I just have to finish a Roxas one first.

So very, very true. D: So busy. AND YET.

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angelflare April 26 2007, 03:36:45 UTC

I really liked it~~! ^_^

Specially the last line. It's so touching.

libekory April 26 2007, 03:41:07 UTC

Ee, thanks! :3

angelflare April 26 2007, 03:44:43 UTC

LOL! Icon twins~! *grins*

libekory April 28 2007, 05:34:28 UTC

Bwahaha. Everyone loves that sceenshot. :3

krispy_kream April 26 2007, 04:50:34 UTC

*one of the other Axel/Roxas claims*
Ah~ You write so well! Lovely job with this one :3 Extra points for present tense ♥

(I felt like I had to wait till I finished writing my version before I read this >_>; Don't want to mooch ideas or anything~)

libekory April 26 2007, 05:25:25 UTC

X3 For some reason I find Axel often begs present-tense in his narration for me. No idea why.

(I KNOW. If it helps, I won't be doing them in order? D: On the other hand, more motivation to do things quickly.)

krispy_kream April 26 2007, 05:32:44 UTC

For me, when I want to sound dramatic, I start writing present tense before I realize I'm doing it XD

(Oh noes, I don't think I am either @_@ Maybe it'll turn into a race? Haha~ That's the perfect motivation, "oh no, they wrote that prompt? Now I have to write it so I can read theirs!")

libekory April 28 2007, 05:34:03 UTC

(XD! Oh no. I usually start out strong with these things and then peter off and take months. D:)

demonicfangirl April 26 2007, 05:49:10 UTC

Wow.... that was very sweet - and deep.
Your portrayal of the inside of Axel's head was very moving - I'd like to see what you do from Roxas's POV maybe?

libekory April 26 2007, 07:07:28 UTC

I was actually planning on it. ♥ If I swing it right I'll have ten of each!

And thank you. :D

unedited April 26 2007, 17:47:52 UTC

So eeee. XD

I love the kind of wistful tone you can hear throughout the whole piece, even before you know what Axel's talking about. I looove the descriptions of how Roxas changed him, and the line about Roxas as the prodigal son.

And then at the end, poor woobie Axel. :\

*eee, pompoms writing*

libekory April 26 2007, 18:09:01 UTC

Axel is a sweetie. Whether he wants to be or not. :\

And ♥ Thank you. *applies too-adorable chibi icon to comment*