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Prompt Post: ROUND EIGHT

Aug 10, 2011 08:41

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Charles/Erik, tickling anonymous August 15 2011, 14:49:35 UTC

Charles is extremely ticklish. This gives Erik ideas.

Re: Charles/Erik, tickling anonymous August 16 2011, 13:21:32 UTC

Soooo cute!!!

Fill: Childish Things (1a/1) anonymous August 29 2011, 20:55:38 UTC

“What's the dumbest accident you ever had?” Sean asks over breakfast.

The question unleashes a flood of reminiscences featuring a torched football stadium (Alex), an awkward encounter with bats hanging from the rafters (Hank) and forty-seven greenhouses in a single afternoon (Sean himself).

It's not a conversation Erik's about to join, but he's feeling unusually relaxed after Sunday morning pancakes and maple syrup, mellow enough to let the chatter wash over him with just the occasional spike of irritation at some particular piece of stupidity.

Charles sits there, smiling benignly, listening to it all as if he's taking notes for training purposes. He probably is. Not for the first time, Erik wonders if anyone ever gets under that charming surface - that can't be all there is to the man.

“The dumbest accident I ever had was on Charles's fourteenth birthday,” Raven says, “and it was nothing to do with being a mutant”.

“Doesn't count then,” Alex says. “BoooringRaven ignores him. “Charles knocked me out, thought he'd killed me,” ( ... )

Re: Fill: Childish Things (1a/1) serpenteyes123 August 30 2011, 09:05:42 UTC

I CAN SEE WHERE THIS IS GOING AND I LOVE IT!

[Anon-author] Re: Fill: Childish Things (1a/1) anonymous August 30 2011, 10:52:02 UTC

Thank you very much - it is finished now, but you probably need to click Parent to get the whole fill. *headdesk* I am bad with links...

Fill: Childish Things (1b/1) anonymous August 29 2011, 21:04:23 UTC

Left alone in the kitchen, Erik feels his simmering resentment bubble up and boil over. Charles pushes the rest of them around but nobody gets to push him, oh no ( ... )

Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] anonymous August 29 2011, 21:07:41 UTC

Flurry of fastenings, buttons and zips and then he's pulling down Charles's undershorts and gazing at the mouthwatering sight of Charles's erection, that perfect curve so ready for him. He runs his hands down Charles's bare chest, firmly enough not to tickle this time, strokes his thighs and pushes them further apart, pressing his thumbs along the line of Charles's groin.

Charles is babbling, words tumbling over each other: “Your hands, oh god Erik, love your hands, want them all over me, wanted that so much so long.”

So that's why he was staring. It all makes sense now, not that it matters ( ... )

^^[Anon-author] NB: Fill contains some elements that could be read as dub-con^^ anonymous August 29 2011, 22:40:31 UTC

Anon-author's belated note on rereading the above. First time posting here - sorry if this should have had a warning on.

Re: Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] anonymous August 30 2011, 01:52:51 UTC

This is simply seethingly hot. And tense. And the buildup in Erik's mind during the seemingly mundane breakfast had me breathless. And . . . it feels like the whole fic is washed in testosterone. And some of the phrasing is beyond gorgeous--I usually don't stop during a PWP just to say--wow, that was a great image--but I did it more than once here, which is not to say that it didn't barrel forward pretty damn relentlessly toward the gasping (on my part, not theirs) climax. This is just crazy good mansex with insight into both men's minds and I love that we don't know what the hell happens next and neither do they. Oh yes, also: GUH.

[Anon-author] Re: Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] anonymous August 30 2011, 08:16:27 UTC

*blushes*

Thank you so much for this wonderful comment - I really wasn't sure whether this fic worked as a whole, and I am so pleased that you had that response to it!

Re: Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] richiexcore August 30 2011, 06:01:11 UTC

Um so about how this is perfect and hot.

[Anon-author] Re: Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] anonymous August 30 2011, 08:12:56 UTC

Thank you so much!

Re: Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] anonymous November 14 2011, 07:51:29 UTC

FUCK YEAH. Adorable, hilarious and hot. Poor Raven! X(
That shot of angst at the end gives it this bittersweet tang ... -__-

Re: Fill: Childish Things (1c/1) [end] anonymous November 14 2011, 08:34:03 UTC

thank you very much - so pleased you liked it!

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