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Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 1/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 09:14:00 UTC

AN: Multiple fills are love, right? I had already finished almost all of this before I realized there was another fill, so I figured if I was going to have videos of sharks and dolphins mating stuck in my browser history, I may as well post the fill that required that piece of research. Fun fact: Somewhere out there, a guy waited 15 years to film two sharks having sex.

Complete version on my LJ if you don't want to read it in comment form.

***

Moira MacTaggert knelt down at the edge of the water and dipped her hand in, making light splashes.

"Dinner time, Charles!" she called out. As if on cue, a shadow began to swim towards her underneath the water's surface. It had been an exhausting day of shows for Moira, ending on a particularly sour note as she had yet another argument with Sebastian Shaw, the man who in charge of the Westchester Research Aquarium.

"Great Whites just can't survive in captivity, Dr. Shaw. Do I even need to list off all the aquariums that have tried this and failed? We'll get nothing but bad press from this ( ... )

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 2/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 09:15:02 UTC

"Stop this! You're hurting yourself!" Charles had been dropped rather unceremoniously into the fish tank early the next morning, and he wasted no time swimming towards the shark who was thrashing against the walls as though it offered an escape ( ... )

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 3/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 09:16:01 UTC

Moira arrived the next day to the sight of Hank McCoy looking exceedingly pale ( ... )

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 4/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 09:16:44 UTC

"I think I'm traumatized for life." Hank shook his head.

"Charles is never going to forgive me for cockblocking him. If I knew they weren't hurting each other, I wouldn't have shot Erik with that tranq gun."

"First of all, I never need to hear Charles' name in the same sentence as the word 'cock' again. And second, I can't believe you're worried about hurting a dolphin's feelings! After you caught it having sex with a shark. That is so wrong ( ... )

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 09:17:04 UTC

"The humans are here, Erik. Once these men see the condition you're in, they'll let you go free ( ... )

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 robotlove July 15 2011, 09:34:01 UTC

goodness this one is both FUNNY and so sad!! I love how you tried to stay true to the movie's ending though and I was laughing so hard at the sex THANK YOU THANK YOU

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 09:36:05 UTC

This one will go down as the worst sex scene I have ever written, ever. XD Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it!

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 robinsson July 15 2011, 13:40:25 UTC

nononoonnonoononoooooooooooo!!!!!!
you can't end this like this, please TT you're breaking my heart too much T.T
could you write epilogue if possible? i understand this fic is just wonderful as it is, but i'm now seeing lonely dolphinChalres shedding tears in aquarium...ohmygod...T.T......

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 19:17:39 UTC

I wanted a happy ending! D: But then I couldn't come up with a plausible way to do it, so I left it semi-open-ended.

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 zqs_pineapple July 15 2011, 18:28:22 UTC

"Charles is never going to forgive me for cockblocking him. If I knew they weren't hurting each other, I wouldn't have shot Erik with that tranq gun."

BEST. VERSE. EVER.

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 15 2011, 19:18:10 UTC

Moira means well, she just can't help unintentionally cockblocking Charles and Erik in ALL VERSES. XD

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 zqs_pineapple July 15 2011, 21:54:30 UTC

Or can she? But doesn't want to? :D

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 its_rayning July 15 2011, 22:55:28 UTC

YOU MADE ME CRY. TT^TT

BEST. SHARK. DOLPHIN. FIC. EVER. (Though, the one above this one's fantastic as well!)

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 16 2011, 07:29:39 UTC

These two are just angst machines in every form, really.

Thank you! ♥

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 keio July 16 2011, 12:50:40 UTC

And then, just like that, I'm five again and crying because NOTHING should separate the magic love of sentient dolphins and great white sharks, because sharks are GOOD, if only they'd find that one special dolphin that's meant for them.

I HATE ADULTS.

(TL;DR, I LOVE THIS. How you've taken such crack and just... Gah I can't)

Re: Fill #2: Jaws, Charles/Erik, Erik is a shark - 5/5 qikiqtarjuaq July 16 2011, 19:38:21 UTC

Haha XD Their love is magical but ultimately tragic. Thank you for your comment!

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