Prompt Post: ROUND FOUR

Jun 23, 2011 06:36

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Azazel/Riptide/Shaw, Double Penetration anonymous July 3 2011, 20:43:15 UTC
What the title says. DP, with Bottom!Riptide.
Shaw adores Emma, but he also loves to play with his pretty-faced pool boy time to time. And one day he makes Azazel join them, just wanting to try something new.

+ If Azazel have secret feelings for Riptide.

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Re: Azazel/Riptide/Shaw, Double Penetration anonymous July 4 2011, 14:46:25 UTC
PLEASE! someone!!

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affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 1/4 anonymous July 9 2011, 16:54:07 UTC
"I'd like to try something," Sebastian says, after much deliberation ( ... )

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affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 2/4 anonymous July 9 2011, 16:56:54 UTC
"Azazel, you remember what we talked about," says Sebastian, leaning back, his hand slipping from Riptide.

Azazel nods with the faintest inclination of his head. Janos shivers, maybe at the prospect, maybe simply at the sudden loss of skin contact. Sebastian's hand twists in the sleeve of his shirt and pulls his head down.

"He's agreed," Sebastian supplies.

Azazel blinks. Another nod. With steady hands, he unbuttons his uniform, his tail twisting rigidly, as it does habitually when he is under pressure.

Sebastian, unnoticed, catches a look in Azazel's eye. Something like discomfort, something like affection, something like hungry interest, all caught in the same mess.

It's funny, really, the way he seems to think Sebastian hadn't noticed months ago.

Azazel likes Janos, Emma had told Sebastian with a cat's grin one bored evening.

That's hardly news, he had replied. You don't have to be a telepath.She had frowned, her game ruined, but had found other means of entertainment ( ... )

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affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 3/4 anonymous July 9 2011, 17:01:36 UTC
It seems prudent to start slowly. Janos takes to the situation well, his mouth on Sebastian only slightly more clumsy for Azazel's thrusts, his perfect hair in a state. The kinetic energy pulsing through him like an echo with each movement rides up under Sebastian's skin, inconsequential but delightful. Sebastian spreads his legs a little further, rests one foot against Riptide's thigh and smiles at the rhythmic shudder reverberating through his arch and heel.

Through half-closed eyes he watches Azazel, red skin gleaming with sweat in the moonlight and an indescribable expression to him, as though he's not sure whether this is the single best or single worst thing he's ever done.

"Now," says Sebastian, gently pulling Riptide's head up by the hair, "let's see where else we can take this."

Janos blinks and licks his lips, almost disoriented, until Sebastian pulls him forwards.

"I -- ah! I'm --"

"As I said," Sebastian tells him, voice even, "nobody is forcing you."

He holds up his hands, here, no tricks, nothing up my sleeve ( ... )

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Re: affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 3/4 anonymous July 9 2011, 17:03:50 UTC
(also, ignore html fail D:)

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affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 4/4 anonymous July 9 2011, 17:29:31 UTC
The movement is slightly awkward, the seats barely giving, but seconds later Janos lies back, his shoulders against Sebastian's chest, and Sebastian slips in easily, drawing out only a light moan. Shaking, Riptide nudges in one finger, then two, in a worried attempt at preparation.

Azazel hesitates a moment before Sebastian shoots him a cold, expectant look that drives him to move in.

Sebastian is rarely caught pleasantly unprepared, but this is one of those moments where he is, briefly overwhelmed by the sensation of Azazel's cock against his, by the tensing of Riptide's body, by the young man's strangled groan and by the heated closeness.

"Yes," he hisses. "Yes, that's perfect."

It lasts longer than expected but hardly as long as he'd like. He says little else, preferring instead to watch the other two, Azazel in particular, who looks first slightly guilty, then hopelessly caught in the moment, close to undone, his affection now only barely hidden by something like a glass mask about to go to pieces alongside with him.

Why ( ... )

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OP Here!! anonymous July 9 2011, 18:53:05 UTC
qtjodjsgjsg;s OMFG!!!! This is sooo.. I can't even breath..I think I'm DEAD.
This was totally hot and Wow, everything you did was just soooo awesome. A bit of Angst, mixed feelings, and sexiness...Perfection. You totally blew me away!!
Janos is so cute and sexy at the same time, And Sebastian, You ARE totally forcing him XD And I really, really loved that no matter how much Azazel trying to hide his affection, he just can't help but kiss Janos. awww...So, So emotional.
Thank you so much, I think I can't never thank you enough for this!! Besos♥

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Re: OP Here!! anonymous July 9 2011, 19:45:49 UTC
Glad you liked it, OP :)

Ahh, I probably failed as a writer because I really didn't want it to be a case of him being forced (though Sebastian does understand the fine art of nudging and needling). I hope I didn't unintentionally write something that's a trigger to people.

I did really enjoy writing angsty!closetted!Azazel though.

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Re: OP Here!! anonymous July 10 2011, 07:09:02 UTC
Ayyyy, Sorry for my expression, I hope I didn't offend you by that. I did understand that it's not actually "forcing". It's just that I might be exaggerating since I was way too excited D: (Playing game!Shaw is my favorite Shaw!)
But I can assure you I did not see anything like trigger, and you did an amazing job :)

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Re: affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 4/4 anonymous July 10 2011, 17:56:36 UTC
I would love to see a sequel of sorts where Azazel comes clean with his feelings for Riptide...

But even if you don't, this was simply amazing, and I really loved it.

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Re: affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 4/4 anonymous July 10 2011, 21:31:18 UTC
I don't really have any good ideas for a sequel, but would obviously love to read one if anyone else wants to tag one on :)

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Re: affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 4/4 realpestilence September 12 2011, 12:44:29 UTC
Do you belong to the azazel_riptide comm, by any chance? We're getting ready to have a fest soon, when we hit 100 members; and I'm going to rec this there. :D

I think it's remarkable, not just because it's hot-which it is-but because you caught Shaw's manipulativeness so well. The choice is Janos's, sure; but Shaw knows exactly how to press his buttons so that he ~will make the choice Shaw wants. I really wonder how that conversation with Azazel went, too!

But what I like most is that I don't get the feeling Shaw's trying to hurt them, or is just messing with them or anything. He's enjoying himself, sure. He's a lot older than they are, I think, and it shows. But ultimately, he wants Azazel and Riptide to be happy, right? As long as it doesn't get in the way of business.

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Re: affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 4/4 anonymous July 13 2011, 07:39:08 UTC
Very good - hot and sexy. Yum!

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Re: affettuoso (Shaw/Riptide/Azazel) 4/4 anonymous September 21 2011, 15:37:18 UTC
Damn, that was so good!

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