Prompt Post: ROUND THREE

Jun 13, 2011 12:17

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Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (3/?) anonymous June 19 2011, 02:08:38 UTC
Three.

Three weeks after his resignation, Charles stands in front of his sprawling family mansion in Rochester and thinks, this could work.It takes him a good few hours to reacquaint himself with his boyhood home where he grew up with parents so distant that they may as well have been in another country. But he knows he's fortunate enough, he and Raven, compared to all the broken, silent, sullen kids who have sat in his old office a thousand times, having lived through a thousand horrors. The culmination of their various life experiences have had a hand in shaping his own unique perspective on life, inversely turning him into the unfailing optimist he is today. If he can help these kids, he reasons, then no one is beyond salvation ( ... )

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) anonymous June 20 2011, 05:23:55 UTC
OMFG. AM I READING THE SECOND TO THE LAST LINE CORRECTLY?

ANON, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I CANNOT CONTAIN MY GLEE! THIS IS SO BRILLIANT AND SEXY! THE UST IS KILLING ME!

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) anonymous June 20 2011, 05:40:09 UTC
Charles, you flirtatious bastard!

I'm loving this! I get the feeling that Erik understands more than he's letting on. ;) Can't wait for the next part!

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) brokenbacktango June 20 2011, 10:04:54 UTC
Oh Charles, you so blind!

I am loving this story so far! Keep up the good work, author.

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) janonny June 20 2011, 13:15:15 UTC
I'm terribly amused and enchanted by this fic. Idealistic Charles and an Erik who supposedly doesn't understand him. ♥

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) twelve_pastels June 20 2011, 21:36:51 UTC
Oh, Charles. Make your real feelings known, why don't you. :D

Most excellent!

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) anonymous June 21 2011, 01:42:25 UTC
Last best line ever!

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) kiwiitin June 21 2011, 18:53:41 UTC
I'm really loving this... And what a cliffy! Hngh! Can't wait for more! *cheers to writer!anon*

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) keio June 21 2011, 23:48:23 UTC
LOOOVING what you did here. Do continue! They're all so in-character and endearing, you've translated the movie elements very well X3 You've got a stalking fan now!

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (6/?) anonymous June 22 2011, 11:07:50 UTC
Can't wait to find out how much Erik *does* understand -- and hopefully to find out what the tattoos mean cos damn, hot mental imagery is hot X3
Really really enjoying this, Charles' empathy and battered idealism are conveyed perfectly -- he's as much of a hero as ever. *major hugs* His rapport with Moira is delightful, as with Raven.
I'm really liking the kids so far, too -- yes, haunted and hurt, but healing.
All-round wonderful! Crossing my fingers for more soon =]

(Also, am totally going to have the title song stuck in my head now =D *tools off to watch Young Ones*)

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Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (7/?) anonymous June 22 2011, 16:31:51 UTC
(Sorry if the whole thing seems to be slow, because it keeps growing on me. But yes, I assure you there's a plot, and it will get...steamy at some point. Bear with me! Thank you again so much to everyone reading this!)

seven.

The next morning, Charles comes down to the kitchen with a massive headache after a night of restless sleep, thanks to the weather. He's aware that he said something remarkably stupid to Lehnsherr last night, but he can't remember what it is now and he's just thankful the man doesn't understand English. The smell of coffee wafting from the kitchen perks Charles up a bit, and he staggers into the dining area, taking his seat at the head of the table. Alex and Sean are already in their respective places.

It takes only a microsecond for Charles to realise something is off. When he looks up, he notices both boys are uncharacteristically quiet, looking very wary and wide-eyed. In fact, they seem to be listening intently for something. It is only then that Charles picks up the two voices floating out from the ( ... )

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Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (8a/?) anonymous June 22 2011, 16:33:36 UTC
eight.

The rest of the week passes by quickly enough, and Moira calls up with two more cases she wants to bring over. The boy, Darwin, is a sweet, harmless enough lad whose case Charles had overseen last year, while the girl, Angel, is one of Moira's. Moira whispers in hushed tones that Angel is particularly problematic, and this is the fourth foster home she's been sent to. Charles tells her to send the girl over anyway, and Moira sighs in that way of hers with that don't-say-I-didn't-warn-you tone and it makes Charles smile ( ... )

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Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (8b/?) anonymous June 22 2011, 16:34:31 UTC
After changing the sheets, Charles peeps out of the window to check if Moira had left her car in the driveway. To his surprise, he sees Lehnsherr and Hank standing next to a motorcycle in the driveway, a beautiful black Ducati. Lehnsherr is talking earnestly and making revving motions with his hands, and Hank is utterly enthralled by whatever he is saying. Charles's brow wrinkles in confusion, but it smoothes out again when he remembers that Hank is fluent in seven languages, including German.

Now Lehnsherr is stepping aside and gesturing towards the Ducati, and Hank seems hesitant. After more cajoling from Lehnsherr, the boy finally gives in and throws a long leg over the bike, straddling it comfortably. The growing grin on the boy's face does little to hide his genuine excitement, and Lehnsherr is patting his back heartily in a show of encouragement.

"What are you looking at?" Raven squeezes in beside him, her mouth open in an 'O' when she sees Hank on the Ducati. "Wow. Hank looks pretty bad-ass on that bike ( ... )

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (8b/?) brokenbacktango June 22 2011, 16:52:17 UTC
This isn't slow at all, it's got a nice, steady build to it and it's utterly delicious! You're not rushing it and it'll make the pay off that much sweeter. I just love this fill so, so much! Every time I see that a new part is up I can't help but squeal like a little girl. I just want to draw little hearts around the whole thing.

And I love the little shark comment too. Heh.

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (8b/?) keio June 22 2011, 18:02:20 UTC
Agreed. And you wove the polyglot factor in it so evenly! Love how he's worming his way into everyone's heart/ lives, reserving Charles for the end prize.

Keeping an eye on this, you're doing a fantastic job! :D I kind of have to suck in more air every time I imagine Fassy!Erik in just overalls, worker's gloves, a hard hat maybe, and tools. And tats. ffffffffffff

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Re: Fill: Our House, In The Middle Of Our Street (8b/?) anonymous June 22 2011, 16:53:04 UTC
"That's weird," Alex says with a grin. "If you had fallen down the stairs, I would have understood why he was in a good mood."

HAHAHA! I love snarky Alex! And I totally agree with him.

Oh man, oh man, ERIK IS CRAZY HOT. He speaks Spanish. The tats, leather jacket, the bike. AND THE JEALOUS STREAK. I don't think Charles will ever get a good night's sleep until he taps that.

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