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Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 20 2011, 00:16:50 UTC
From the film:
[as they all looking at Charles's family home]
Sean Cassidy: This is yours?
Charles Xavier: No. It's ours.
Erik Lehnsherr: [sarcastically] Honestly Charles, I don't know how you survived. Living in such hardship.
Raven: Well, it was a hardship softened by me.

In comic canon, Charles' childhood was a little less idyllic than the others seem to think. So, someone finds out something wasn't right, whether it's a blatant revelation or the uneasy sense that Something Just Wasn't Right in the Xavier household. Dramatic or subtle, one person or everyone, from psychic projection or something material - totally up to authoranon.

(Bonus for not overshadowing Erik's own past; there really isn't much that can compare to the Holocaust. This is more just for recognition that Charles, while certainly privileged in a lot of ways, really wasn't in others.)

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 20 2011, 02:00:03 UTC
+1

Thanks, btw, for including that last line. Suffering shouldn't be a game of 'check whose is longer'. Some people may suffer an ocean, and some a drop, and neither should be invalidated because of the other.

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 21 2011, 21:00:09 UTC
Well said. Just because there's someone out there who has gone through worse, doesn't make someone else's pain less real.

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 20 2011, 02:07:36 UTC
Thirded!

I also commend you on the last line. I think that a lot of the time Charles knows how much more other people have suffered than him and assumes that for some reason that invalidates his own pain.

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 20 2011, 02:55:18 UTC
I always thought it might be an interesting way to look at them. Charles, who was wronged by his family, but accepted by society, and Erik, who was wronged by society but loved by his family. How that shaped two very different world views.

....But yeah, I totally would love to see this filled.

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 27 2011, 04:37:48 UTC
OP again.

That always interested me too. Charles: upperclass, wealthy, no real family (save Raven, and that's a whole other bundle of issues), witnesses a wide array of human evils looking out through his telepathy. Erik: lowerclass, poor, a loving mother (at least), witnesses a wide array of human evils as they're focused in against him and his people. While reiterating the points that, one, not much compares to the Holocaust, but also, two, that it doesn't make Charles' childhood abuse/neglect less important -- yeah, the ways in which they parallel and contrast one another makes for a lot of potential meta and interesting character dynamics. :D

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 20 2011, 04:17:51 UTC
Finally someone mentioned this.

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Re: Gen or Charles/Erik: Childhoods and Cain. anonymous June 22 2011, 04:02:54 UTC
What I've been waiting for!!!!

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Filled: Not Right, 1/1. anonymous June 27 2011, 02:28:18 UTC
He figures it out in stages, in the whispers between Raven and Charles and the locked doors and the areas of the house that Charles will not, cannot, enter ( ... )

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OP anonymous June 27 2011, 02:56:40 UTC
The subtlety and showing-without-telling or ~gasping drama makes the whole thing rather more powerful. Absolutely lovely. Excuse me while I reread it a few times and stroke it creepily but lovingly.

Captcha says LOVE in all caps. :D

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Re: Filled: Not Right, 1/1. schweinsty June 27 2011, 03:00:24 UTC
Oh, I really loved this. It's so understated but really gets the point across.

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Re: Filled: Not Right, 1/1. hyde_the_body June 28 2011, 03:04:15 UTC
So delicate! So subtle! This is going in my memories forever.

Foreveeeeeer.

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Re: Filled: Not Right, 1/1. nagasasu June 28 2011, 05:40:57 UTC
Oh, anon, this is wonderful. The use of parentheses, and that Erik doesn't say anything in this. Much love. <3

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Fill 2: couldn't swallow, couldn't get to sleep. (1a/?) anonymous June 30 2011, 22:08:39 UTC
(the other fill was lovely. I hope OP doesn't mind another.)

Charles' control is brilliant. And, in retrospect, that's really the first thing that should have made him suspicious. Charles never, never makes mistakes--no misfires, no slips. Absolutely nothing. Everything he does, he means, every thought he shares is precisely what he wants to communicate.

Erik himself can't control his power half the time. He still makes snarled messes of the TV antenna when Alex's jibes wear a little thin and God knows, the rest of them make mistakes. Even Raven forgets her eye colour, sometimes, but Charles never does. Erik never sees him slip.

Erik could attribute it to a thousand things. Charles had a better education, a better upbringing, a better chance. A mutant sister, someone to grow with and around and into, because he and Raven don't finish each other's sentences, but it's a close miss. Maybe Charles learned so he could teach Raven. Maybe his power developed early. Maybe he's had longer to learn. Maybe he's just a natural ( ... )

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Re: Fill 2: couldn't swallow, couldn't get to sleep. (1b/?) anonymous June 30 2011, 22:09:39 UTC
He's not...happy, necessarily. Maybe he is. He's not sure what happiness actually should feel like and maybe that constant worry at the back of his head is normal. Maybe everyone has that. Maybe he is happy, maybe, maybe. He knows there's a warm thrum in his belly when it's just him and Charles and a chess set in front of the fireplace and that's completely alien, but not as frightening as it should have been ( ... )

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Re: Fill 2: couldn't swallow, couldn't get to sleep. (1b/?) nagasasu June 30 2011, 22:50:26 UTC
Oh, forgot to mention in my other comment; what I like so much about the opening is how perfect everything seems to be, particularly Charles. So much so, that you know something's going to happen to throw a wrench in that, and I'm rather dying to know what.

Anyways, I like that line about Erik liking Breakfast at Tiffany's and how Raven just chills in his room. XD

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