My Chemical Romance - "Make Me Tremble (Make Me Shake)", Frank/Gerard

[1st_eggokage]

title: Make Me Tremble (Make Me Shake)
fandom: Bandom (My Chemical Romance)
pairing: girl!Frank Iero/girl!Gerard Way
rating/warnings: R for fumbly teenage lesbians and their filthy mouths. also, shamelessly toothrotting fluff with a side of mild body image issues.
words: 2629
notes: For madcap_shiny and swiiftly, because without them I would have dropped out long ago

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AWKWARD BABY LESBIANS

[madcap_shiny]

"No, okay, fucking give it to me," Frankie says, and her voice is low and rough, making what would be a line from a cheap porno on anyone else's tongue sound like the filthiest and most perfect words Gee's ever heard.

HNNGH.

More coherent thoughts later when I'm not covered in floor Latin and you're not covered in Lit paper.

[1st_eggokage]

/draws ALL OF THE HEARTS ON YOU

yeah you BETTER give me more coherent thoughts later. AND YOU'RE ALWAYS COVERED IN FLOOR.

[madcap_shiny]

+ Okay, first off:

not even like Frankie groping her is an uncommon occurrence

LOLOL GET IT GIRL :DDD /obnoxious fratboy whistling

+ Frankie is an obnoxious little shit in EVERY UNIVERSE AND I LOVE IT. Like. Obviously it is offensive that Gee didn't fake-accidentally grope her back. Obviously.

+ oh Gee. oh Gee's nerdy dream sequences.

+ Gee's not really in a position to argue.

Hahaha no. REALLY NOT.

+ Maybe Gee's just easy, but every time Frankie's guitar calluses drag fast and rough over her clit she feels like she's going to come right then and there.
THIS IS ONE OF THE LINES IN HERE THAT'S JUST UNBEARABLE. JUST. LIKE. I CAN'T. NO WORDS. (Calluses are always hot, okay.)

+ "Dude," Gee says, reproachful, "I do not need to be thinking about my baby sister right now,"
Pfffff. Whatever, Gee, in another life you're the one that's going to lustily run a hand through her hair while she's trying to play bass, Jesus Christ. (AMONG OTHER THINGS.)

+ "C'mon, I just gave you a fucking awesome orgasm, my turn now."EVERY UNIVERSE.

[1st_eggokage]

+ I REALLY LOVE FRANK IERO BEING A LITTLE SHIT IN EVERY UNIVERSE IF YOU COULD NOT TELL.

+ you know she's probably dreamed about them doing that upside-down spider-man kiss in the rain too.

+ hahaha that is kind of one of my favorite lines also. /VAIN

+ SHE DOESN'T WANT TO ADMIT SHE HAS TOTALLY BEEN NOTICING HOW MIKEY'S GROWING UP.

+ As soon as this paper is done killing me I am going to write a drabble about voyeur!Mikeyway just for you. And also something about how Mikey taught Gee how to kiss. IT WILL HAPPEN. I AM WEAK TO WAYCEST.

+ awkward and faily > smooth and sexy. at least in my book.

+ ahahahaha she TOTALLY WOULD. Inexplicable smugness and sitting on Gee's lap even more than usual. Gee facepalms a whole lot and is awkward. Probably Brianna catches them making out before band practice or something (which was totally intentional on Frankie's part) and is basically like JUST DON'T FUCK UP THE BAND OKAY SIGH.

[teh_slush]

N'awwwwww.

[1st_eggokage]

I KNOW I KNOW OKAY I AM SORRY THEY JUST GOT ALL FLUFFY AND RIDIC.

[teh_slush]

OH SO IT'S A NORMAL FIC ABOUT FRANK AND GERARD?

[1st_eggokage]

pretty much yes. /o\

...how is this like, the longest thing i've ever written.

[swiiftly]

I CONTINUE TO LOVE ALL OF THIS.

The parallel of the dream/reality bit is still FANTASTIC and I love this image so fucking much: a fuck-you smirk going soft against her mouth and inked hands pressing her wrists to the wall. I love everything about tough little Frankie, all tattooed and snuggly and impatient and bossy. Mmmmf. The bit Kyrie quoted = REALLY GREAT. Also this: tiny and beautiful and there's sweat trailing down her tattoos and she's still wearing her fucking school uniform...BASICALLY I LOVE ALL YOUR DESCRIPTIONS OF FRANKIE.

And Gee! Gee being so sensitive to every touch and having to work through how everything is weird but also GREAT and...it just feels very real! And she would be that just...AWARE of everything as it happened, you know?

IN CONCLUSION, BABY LESBIAN FRANKIE AND GEE ARE MY FAVOURITES AND YOU SHOULD WRITE THEM FOREVERRRRRR. I want all the adventures of Frankie and Gee being sickeningly in love, ha. MOST PRECIOUS.

you are the best. :D

[1st_eggokage]

akdjflsdjs I APPRECIATE ALL OF YOUR THOUGHTS. ♥!!

Regular Frank Iero is hot. The mental image of lesbian Frank Iero (much like lesbian Spencer Smith) is one of those things that KILLS MY BRAIN and I cannot stop talking about it ever. *_________*

I AM REALLY GLAD THE REALISM CAME THROUGH. I just kind of. SEX IS WEIRD AND SEX FOR THE FIRST TIME IS EXTRA WEIRD and they say write what you know, amirite? /o\ And Gee's brain thinks itself in circles likewhoa and gets distracted and goes off on tangents but is still mostly aware of every single thing that's going on and I'm so glad that came across.

THERE WILL BE MORE AT SOME POINT! I seem to have just inadvertently promised Kyrie I would write Mikeyfic in this verse so. THERE'S THAT AT LEAST.

:D :D :D no u.