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GRAVITATION

Jun 09, 2009 08:09

GRAVITATION

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Tatsuha/Shuichi tera_flare June 10 2009, 13:45:51 UTC

He only had awareness of Shuichi's scent blanketing him and a whisper of the word 'repercussions' in the furthest reaches of his consciousness.

Re: Tatsuha/Shuichi lawless523 June 10 2009, 18:33:23 UTC

Thanks for contributing. If Eiri finds out he'd' better remember he needs to leave Tatsuha functional if he wants to avoid being the successor to the family temple.

Judy/K bitterfig June 10 2009, 22:10:22 UTC

“Time to break out the big guns,” Judy purred as she tugged on his belt.

Re: Judy/K lawless523 June 11 2009, 00:06:42 UTC

Hee! Nice job.

Re: Judy/K bitterfig June 12 2009, 00:50:18 UTC

Thanks. One sentence writing is a really good way to try out pairings you've never written before.

Re: Judy/K lawless523 June 12 2009, 00:57:19 UTC

Since much of the point is being clever, sometimes the more unusual pairings work better. I wrote some pairings I hate but they were easier to work into an interesting sentence.

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Yuki/Shuichi bitterfig June 10 2009, 22:17:56 UTC

The nights when Yuki fucked him like a porn star were pretty spectacular but what Shuichi really cherished were the quite, simpler times when they might just be hanging out and Yuki would unexpectedly take his hand then one thing would lead to another as naturally and inevitably as water flowing downhill.

Re: Yuki/Shuichi lawless523 June 11 2009, 00:07:48 UTC

Aww. It's nice to get a gentler sweet one as well.

Re: Yuki/Shuichi bitterfig June 12 2009, 12:44:01 UTC

While I imagine the sort of stuff that happens in the re-mixes would be fun sometimes I think the actual relationship is based on intimacy that's a little more gentle and comfortable.

Re: Yuki/Shuichi lawless523 June 12 2009, 12:52:30 UTC

These guys have regular lives too. They'd have to be athletes to go at it like bunnies (or porn stars) all the time. Besides, look at all the times Eiri caresses Shuichi's face, or holds hims, especially in the earlier volumes, even before they have sex for the first time. To me those are caring gestures that go beyond the merely sexual. Eiri seems to find some comfort in acts of physical affection as well as in sex.

That said, even without the Remixes and Megamixes, you'd have to assume, based on what's established in the earlier volumes and Eiri's exceptionally active sex life prior to meeting Shuichi, that they sometimes do it like porn stars.

Tohma/Ryuichi lawless523 June 11 2009, 13:32:36 UTC

Tohma thought Ryuichi never sounded better than when he panted and moaned beneath him and screamed as he came.

Eiri/Tohma lawless523 June 11 2009, 13:54:42 UTC

Tohma usually insisted on being on top but he was willing to make an exception if it enabled him to squeeze the cream out of his beloved brother-in-law after sharing the delectable sweets they both loved so much.

I loathe this pairing with a passion but it's a fun one to write a sentence for.