Comments | 1sentence: Shaman King, Yoh x Amidamaru, Theme Set Alpha.

tsumiamethyst in 1sentence

Shaman King, Yoh x Amidamaru, Theme Set Alpha.

Jul 10, 2007 19:52

Fandom: Shaman King.
Pairing: Yoh Asakura x Amidamaru.
Theme set: Alpha.
Rating: PG - Very soft R. (Yaoi)
Disclaimer: I do not own Shaman King, the theme set I have used, or the characters mentioned in this piece.
AN: I've had great fun doing this, and even if I don't get any comments - Which is more than likely, considering how rare this pairing is ( Read more... )

!set alpha, shaman king

Comments 5

irish_ais July 10 2007, 19:03:40 UTC

I'm not real familiar with the fandom (re: pretty much not at all), but I think you've got a good fluid writing style that works for 1sentence. :D

Would you mind terribly putting these behind a cut, though, just for length? Thanks so much!

tsumiamethyst July 10 2007, 19:06:19 UTC

I realised as soon as I posted it I'd forgotten to do something. ^^;; Thank you very much!

trialia July 10 2007, 19:34:07 UTC

The writing style's good, even though I don't know these characters, but I was kind of offended by your homosexuality disclaimer. Not friendly.

tsumiamethyst July 10 2007, 19:37:28 UTC

Thank you for commenting, even though you don't know the series or characters. As for my disclaimer, it was not intended to offend. I myself am bisexual, and it was not my intention to offend in the slightest. I'll edit it.

trialia July 10 2007, 19:42:11 UTC

Thank you, I really appreciate that. :) And I hope you write more! I'm not in the fandom, but I'll keep an eye out anyway.