Disturbing the Peace (Stephanie Brown, Jason Todd, PG-13, The Batclan)

[1_900_mimicry]

Title: Disturbing the Peace
Author: Mimic
Characters/Pairings: Stephanie Brown, Jason Todd
Rating: PG-13 for language.
Disclaimer: I don't play for keeps. DC owns them.
Notes: More of Steph and Jay, because I wrote Once and Forever, and certain people wanted it more explored. Unfortunately when I tried it didn't seem to want to happen. (Jason

Comments

[trascendenza]

“We didn’t deserve heaven. We weren’t good enough for it.”
Ouchouchouchouch.

And her longing to be back home, and especially having the wound poked at by him... double ouch.

Their snark is razor sharp and reveals a lot about their personalities. Nicely done :)

[1_900_mimicry]

Jason is very good at being ouchy. This kind of makes me want to try something from his point of view, just to show that Steph can hurt him just as good. He just doesn't show it.

Their snark is fun to write, but it also makes me wince a lot. I wish they didn't have to be so awful to each other.

But then. They're the Even Robins. Glad you liked. *hugs*

[1_900_mimicry]

He really can't.

And I can't seem to help hurting Steph. I'd say I'll fix her, but I'm not sure it's possible.

[jij]

“We didn’t deserve heaven. We weren’t good enough for it.” The words are spoken sharp and painfully.

Wow, I agree, this line is condensed pain. Ouch.

It always throws her off balance to see him like that in the damn Robin suit. The one with the panties, no less.

Heh, the incongruity between the rather silly outfit and the very brutal circumstances they find themselves in is sharp and nice.

Good continuation!

[1_900_mimicry]

Thanks. I guess I really don't understand the full impact of what I'm writing while I'm doing it. Or at least, I don't think I meant for this to be this hurty. It seems to slip in though.

Jason in the old Robin suit never fails to amuse me. I (sort of) want the story of just how Bruce got him to wear it.

[nokomis305]

Poor Steph, and poor Jason, too! They almost remind me of siblings here (Normally I'd call them a couple but this completely lacks sexual tension), united through Robin-ness and death. Still bickering but so very connected.

[1_900_mimicry]

Yeah, I usually think of them having more of a couple-y feel too, but this ended up being something different. Somehow I don't think Steph would be in the right mindset(?) after her death to get involved with Jay. At this point at least she's still very attatched to Timmy.

[dariclone]

Aw, really liked this one. Jason can indeed be a jerk.

[1_900_mimicry]

Thank you. Jay thinks he's doing it for her own good, but y'know, not really helping.