Comments | 1_900_mimicry: Moving, Shock, Brothers (Tim/Jason/Dick, NC-17, DCU)

1_900_mimicry

Moving, Shock, Brothers (Tim/Jason/Dick, NC-17, DCU)

Jul 26, 2007 00:50

I was scribbling last night to Pixie, and somehow got snippets out of it that I thought were good enough to post. (With, admittedly, some coaxing.)

x-posted to my IJ

Title: Moving
Characters/Pairing: Tim/Dick
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 300

( Dick makes surprised noises against his mouth when Tim kisses him. )

dick, tim, slash, fic, jason

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1_900_mimicry July 29 2007, 00:11:25 UTC

Thank you!

I love the issues the Robins have with each other, and I will never get tired of writing them having sex.

jij July 26 2007, 10:59:37 UTC

Dick's strangled, little gasp makes Tim pull away up until he sees those -- too bright -- blue eyes widening at him, and he kisses Dick again to distract them both.

That is such an awesome moment! So freighted with things unsaid and maybe even unthought...

His breath is panicked and heavy by turn, but he can't feel anything other than *safety* in the recesses of his mind.

That sentence sums up everything that's incredible about Robinsex, just about any variation of it--that no matter how strange or violent or uncontrolled things might happen to get, there's still an unbreakable sense of security in their relationship.

As always, magnificent!

1_900_mimicry July 29 2007, 00:14:36 UTC

That is such an awesome moment! So freighted with things unsaid and maybe even unthought...

Thanks. Dick/Tim is *such* a fraught pairing, mostly because it *could* be so simple, if only they would wake up to it.

Silly boys.

that no matter how strange or violent or uncontrolled things might happen to get, there's still an unbreakable sense of security in their relationship.

Yes! That's it exactly. Their *Robin*, and that will never change.

rubynye July 26 2007, 13:07:44 UTC

Mmm, Robins. (I'd say lots more--- you deserve much more comment--- had I time.)

1_900_mimicry July 29 2007, 00:16:50 UTC

Aw, I'll take that anytime.

*showers you with Robins*

darkdanc3r July 26 2007, 16:45:47 UTC

Oh purr. I love Robin porn, and we never get to see enough of it.

1_900_mimicry July 29 2007, 00:18:06 UTC

No, there's a sad shortage of it. :D

ladybugkay July 26 2007, 22:29:27 UTC

Sorry about not commenting on 2 and 3, but I am not a big fan of Jason.

But "Moving" I LOVE! Dick/Tim makes me melt just hearing their names together, and this is so perfect. Because Tim will always have to be the one to make the first move, and then Dick just won't be able to resist him. Tim loves (and wants) Dick so much it almost kills him, and Dick loves (and wants) Tim just as much once he is forced to realize it.

The desperation and sheer physicality of it all is beautiful, and Dick's moments of epiphany are so wonderfully obvious, and the description is so accurate and appropriate and visual that I can see it all happening. Loved this!

1_900_mimicry July 29 2007, 00:22:37 UTC

Not a Jay fan? That's a shame. He's my favorite.

Dick/Tim makes me melt just hearing their names together, and this is so perfect.

Hee! I'm the same way, and thank you!

And you're right that Dick is just so *clueless* to the pure love Tim feels for him. It makes him slap my forehead and sigh, because Diiick.

The desperation and sheer physicality of it all is beautiful, and Dick's moments of epiphany are so wonderfully obvious, and the description is so accurate and appropriate and visual that I can see it all happening. Loved this!

Thank you again! I don't often right fic that depends on description and movement, and doesn't include dialogue. But I'm glad I was able to get it right this time.