Senses Challenge - Andromeda

[fiandyfic]

TITLE: Love is Blind
AUTHOR: Andromeda
FANDOM: Life on Mars
RATING: Brown Cortina, slash: Sam/Gene
WORD COUNT: 550 words
EMAIL: fiandyfic@livejournal.com
AUTHOR'S NOTES: Written for the 1973flashfic Senses challenge. It seems I can't quite get off the porn ride. Hurrah for Pervember indeed. Despite the title, this is slightly fluffy and not at all angsty. I

Comments

[fawsley]

Gorgeous, glorious, heartwrenchingly beautiful writing and with Sam on top!

For these acts, between dusk and daybreak, when the harsh light of day cannot expose and tarnish; for these acts need nothing else.

That's the line that does it for me.

I'd send you more cookies but I think you've had far too many already, so have an organic slash carrot instead for your bunnies, may they ever thrive and multiply!

[m31andy]

*gah*

Don't feed the bunnies. Please, don't feed the bunnies. They get hyper and start breeding with each other. Then next thing you know, you're attempting to write fic where everyone in the universe swaps bodies and it's up to James May to save the day!!!

[lackadaisydilly]

*interjects* Sorry, but are you really attempting to write that fic? Because that sounds awesome.

[m31andy]

Oh, hell. I've been 'attempting' to write the fic for about ten months, but all I've got so far is the 'coming soon' adverts.

Which are here and, er, here.

I keep trying to persuade folk to adopt this one, but it always fails.

Because apparently, I love posting comments without having read the thing on which I'm commenting

[jantalaimon]

Having not yet read this, I have to say just from the title and knowing it's you AND reading the A/N, I automatically started hearing Gene muttering something about how "you'll put an eye out with that thing."

*ducks*

Re: Because apparently, I love posting comments without having read the thing on which I'm commentin

[m31andy]

You are a sick woman. And that's official!

[saintvic]

This was completely gorgeous and such a poetic look at Gene and Sam and their relationship. It shows how deep their connection is and beautiful the relationship can be. I can't pick a favourite line as it is all wonderful.

[m31andy]

Thanks!

Sometimes (but not very often) I like them to be sweet.

*g*

[draycevixen]

I really like how aural the piece is... no double entendre (initially) intended.

[m31andy]

Thanks!

Double entrendres are always appreciated!

[draycevixen]

Apart from the general literate loveliness, the thing I like best about this comm so far is that I didn't stop to worry that you'd think I'd misspelled "oral." :D

[sytaxia]

I think bistokids said it best with the fact that the hot is totally secondary in this fic: the emotions wrapped up in sensations give such a clear picture of everything, the details of the action fall behind and the true momentum of the sex is so much more apparent. Fantastic stuff!

[m31andy]

*grin*

Yeah, in my mind it's like stripping down the car to see the beauty of combustion within. After all, the majority of what we do to each other is not the action, but the intent.