Tension Challenge - Andromeda

May 13, 2007 00:55

TITLE: Pokerface
AUTHOR: Andromeda
FANDOM: Life on Mars
SUMMARY: In a Hell of his own making, Sam tries to bluff his way out.
RATING: White Cortina
WORD COUNT: 390
EMAIL: fiandyfic@livejournal.com
AUTHOR'S NOTES: For the Tension Challenge. With thanks to darthfi for the beta.
DISCLAIMER: Life on Mars is copyright Kudos and the BBC. All Rights Reserved ( Read more... )

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lozenger8 May 13 2007, 01:53:27 UTC
Eeee! Palpable tension! I love it.

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m31andy May 13 2007, 11:02:57 UTC
Thanks!

You know, the tension is all over here - by the time I posted the above, I'd read it through so many times that I didn't know if it worked any more.

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bistokids May 13 2007, 08:59:09 UTC
Fantastic - kept me guessing right till the end! ('Sam tied to a chair' bunny has just got very over-excited - calm bunny calm!)

ps we're flying the flaaaaaag - all oooover the woooorld (am I helping?XD)

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m31andy May 13 2007, 10:45:13 UTC
*grin*

Thanks! Yeah, the first line came first and it was *such* a different bunny.

Then I remembered I've got the ropes elsewhere....

Nope, that's not helping - but I do have the antidote. Sieben, Sieben, Ai lyu lyu. Sieben, Sieben ein, zwei. Sieben, Sieben, Ai lyu lyu, ein, zwei, drei.

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lozenger8 May 13 2007, 16:17:53 UTC
Is that the Ukraine entry for Eurovision?

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m31andy May 13 2007, 20:22:30 UTC
Why, yes. Yes it is.

Complete with Elton John look-a-like in drag with a great big star on his head.

Very, very scary...

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hambelandjemima May 13 2007, 10:17:15 UTC
Very tense. I had to hide the last part of the story so that I wouldn't be tempted to read it out of order, lol.

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m31andy May 13 2007, 10:46:46 UTC
Thank you!

*grin*

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jantalaimon May 13 2007, 14:28:37 UTC
Very nice, and for some reason I was totally expecting Evil!Annie to be in the chair opposite. Was totally surprised by the end. :)

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m31andy May 13 2007, 20:24:13 UTC
Ah, under the circumstances I'm very glad I've still got the power to surprise you!

And I've got *plans* for evil!Annie, don't you worry.

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liquorishflame May 16 2007, 23:07:41 UTC
I love poker stories, especially since I can't write them. This was perfection, story wise, and Sam wise :)

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m31andy May 17 2007, 06:30:20 UTC
*grin*

Thanks! Glad it worked!!!

(Sam wise? As in Gamgee??? *envisages LOTR/LOM... Hmm*)

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liquorishflame May 17 2007, 22:19:36 UTC
Yeah, I realized the pun once I'd posted ;)
Now hold your horses! If you get too carried away, we'll have Sam and Gene throwing the cortina in Mount Doom or something.
Of course, that could work as crack fic ;D

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m31andy May 18 2007, 07:12:58 UTC
What? The "One true piston ring to bind them?"

*grin*

"Forged in the burning fires of Dagenham, the Cortina is indestructible..."

*envisages Morgan as half-wraith, half British Sports Car*

*giggles uncontrollably*

Pass the plot-bunny-cide, please...

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