Pre-Reader needed!

[17thgaffer]

I know that by now my f-list refuse to be real help to me when it comes to my fics. You really prefer to let me suffer and then present my stories to you, without me knowing if I've really written something crap XD!!!!

Anyway! I REALLY need some help this time.

I've written the 3rd Chapter to 'Lukaz' but I really, really, need someone to pre-

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[tierpolizistin]

I would be more than happy to proof it for you and give you my critique if you want. You already have my email addy. :)

[17thgaffer]

I'd love it if you could!

I'll send it to you now :)!

[tierpolizistin]

Okej no problem. :) I am not at home....doing petsitting tonight and it requires a sleepover at the house (dog's apparently are scared in a big house all by themselves at night??), and I would check my webmail, but dumbass me left my MS Outlook open on my laptop, so it downloads my emails every like 2 min or something...so I will read it once I get home in the morning. xD (and can I say, that for all the money these people who own these dogs have, their internet connection SUCKS, it's sooo slow, and their computer is ancient! xD ...and they don't even have a DVD player...I think they may be part Amish...LOL!)

And tsk, tsk, tsk woman! What's with you thinking you've ever even ONCE written something crap? Not even close! But I'll give you my honest opinion, promise. :)

BTW, did you get my email I had sent about the Weihnachtskarten-Idee? :)

[17thgaffer]

I just sent it to you. Petsitting. Poor you! Of all the things I've done as work I haven't done that yet.
What type of people are you staying at tonight XD?

I'm not sure if its to over done. With something this touchy, I'm scared someone will complain or something. I'm also not to sure about it.
I was listening to the 'Equilibrium' soundtrack when I wrote it.

Weinachstkarten? Weis nicht. Kannst du zur mir weder senden. Mein hotmail is komisch XD.

[tierpolizistin]

Okej, I just read it and emailed you my commentary on it...hopefully your hotmail will behave and you'll receive it. :)