Succubus

Sep 22, 2006 12:24

For sionnain *blows kisses* I love you!

Magneto/Rogue, gen

Maria D'Acanto is a Succubus, and St. Augustine is no place for Witchbreed.

Succubus )

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inathunderstorm September 22 2006, 16:46:06 UTC
*FLAILS*

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Um, I liked it. A lot. Could you tell?

*falls over dead*

I LOVE YOU! *blows kisses back* *tackles*

Aiee! So awesome! Thank you so much, this is just wonderful!!

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artaxastra September 22 2006, 18:06:17 UTC
Thank you! I was excited to get you, and I'm so glad you liked it! *huggety*

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newredshoes September 22 2006, 20:17:28 UTC
Oh, Maria! Poor baby -- I love your description of the flirting, and I love that Magneto laughs off being the devil. To treat her as a succubus is a clever turn -- thanks muchly for this!

She could see the masts of ships silhouetted against the sky.

I don't know why this is so beautiful a sentence, but it is.

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artaxastra September 24 2006, 11:31:08 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Magneto is so much fun to write, in any universe! Thank you!

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likeadeuce September 22 2006, 22:13:52 UTC
Aww, the poor girl, and good for Enrique!

This was such an ingenious yet logical way to bring Rogue into this 'verse. I love it!

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artaxastra September 24 2006, 22:13:00 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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artaxastra September 24 2006, 22:13:23 UTC
Thank you!

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willowaus September 22 2006, 23:46:34 UTC
Oooo. Very nice. Having her be a succubus was an amazing idea. Simply wonderful.

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cad27 September 23 2006, 01:07:22 UTC
Seconded!

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artaxastra September 24 2006, 22:14:00 UTC
Thank you!

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artaxastra September 24 2006, 22:13:41 UTC
Thank you so much!

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