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Dark Kisses - Chapter Four

Jul 14, 2010 13:44

Title: Dark Kisses
Author: 15SujuBerries
Chapter: 4/?
Pairings: (Main!) YeWon, HanChul, HaeHyuk, and other pairings.
Rating: NC-17
Genre: AU, Romance, Humor, Fluff, Some Angst, Drama(?), Smut, Supernatural, Dark
Disclaimer: I don’t own the boys... Or do I? Lol, just kidding XD *Dies*
A/N: I thought of Kingdom Hearts (Game) then Organization XIII ( Read more... )

au, yewon, fluff, kangteuk, haehyuk, nc-17

Comments 28

eundaesi July 15 2010, 01:46:50 UTC

I'm also confuse about this fic too
please tell me the point in this fic
please......

hope read your next chappie soon
keep fighting! ^_<

15sujuberries July 15 2010, 20:37:41 UTC

Wah, Sorry for confusing >_<
I guess the point is that Yesung wants to remember everything and find Shin and his brother or something... ^^

heartl0ck July 15 2010, 03:16:59 UTC

“Why do you always wear too tight jeans?” the taller one asked. “So it’s harder for you to remove.” the smaller one replied bluntly.
This is funny! ;D

Was Yesung thinking of escaping?
I don't think Donghae gonna kill Eunhyuk.
&&& Siwon is sh-in? O.o!

15sujuberries July 15 2010, 20:41:15 UTC

Eunhyuk won't die but one of them might get injured...
Yesung was thinking and he succeeds but something happens ^^

babysuju July 15 2010, 03:33:25 UTC

little YS part in here...hope more YeWon to come..well i'm curious on what goin to happen next..

15sujuberries July 15 2010, 20:43:02 UTC

Thank you for reading^^

yukichi_1004 July 15 2010, 05:23:26 UTC

Oh my god this is getting awesome! <3 Kangteuk moment!
And for some weird reason I got confused near the ending Dx

15sujuberries July 15 2010, 20:44:18 UTC

Really? Thanks~ *Hugs*
Haha, Sorry for confusing you >_<...

if_rchanluvsj July 15 2010, 07:47:01 UTC

oh oh,,update,,,
“Damn raccoon!” Leeteuk glared. “You said you wouldn’t call me that anymore if I stopped calling you angel!”
haha like this line,,,

and what kyuhyun mean by “Idiot~ I don’t give a damn about my past... Neither do you Shi-” if he want to call sw as mmm can i said that(i think i can't ruin all) but you know wath i mean right?..hmm that's great if that right,but if it's right then i am so sad with this line “What is Yesung to you...?”
“A mere tool to help me gain something important back...”
“And what is that?”
“Reminiscence of my past...” Siwon sighed, “What is he to you?”

ah about yesung brother you tell he will appear in this chapp,is he? then is my vote right?

15sujuberries July 15 2010, 20:45:50 UTC

Haha, It's either KI or LT ^^