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13empress

FIC: The Foreign Affair

Aug 28, 2009 13:13

WHY oh WHY when I know that I am a K/S fan writing another Sulu/Chekov?? It is bizarre and then some. Being the do-gooder that I am, I have been merticulously combing over the unfilled prompts from the STXI Kink Meme - all five thousand of them.
This was written after I read Saul Bellows [who I actually hate] and in reflection of Anais Nin [who I ( Read more... )

genre: alternate universe, pairing: chekov/sulu, stxi kink meme, fanfiction

Comments 11

alldoubtaboutit August 28 2009, 05:47:44 UTC

HELLOOO.

Okay um omg I am such a sucker for AUs and whoever the original prompter is I bet she'll be a v.v.v. happy person after this. I love the writing style and historicity. <333

As a little aside there are minor grammatical errors which can be corrected, if you so wish I can do a little beta for this. :D

13empress August 28 2009, 05:51:09 UTC

OMGOSH WOULD YOU
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
those stupid little grammar errors are like my pet peeve so much <3 <3

not the op duckduck October 20 2009, 17:48:37 UTC

There needs to be more of this, like, yesterday. Oh, I love it. It's gorgeous. Mmmm.

paperthin_sin October 21 2009, 05:28:49 UTC

SF;sdgdfldkfdfsd f;;;; please more, oh goodness oh goodness. this tickles my fancy like nothing else and you are FABULOUS. BOOKMARKED. stalking you forevers.

13empress October 21 2009, 11:13:21 UTC

:) are you the op?

paperthin_sin October 26 2009, 04:12:12 UTC

no ma'am! but apparently my interests match up smashingly with theirs! XDD

motherlyclucker January 4 2010, 03:26:55 UTC

OHMYGODILOVETHIS! I have a huge thing for AU, and this one was perfect! TRACKING!

grea January 6 2010, 18:19:30 UTC

*flail* OMG! I love this so much.

There will be more, yes? This is the just the prologue and there will be many, many chapters of this, yes?

[[not the op]]

13empress January 7 2010, 02:31:27 UTC

Um I wasn't planning more because as far as I was concerned no one was reading it :) I'm glad you liked it though. If you wanted it to continue, did you have any ideas to offer?

grea January 7 2010, 14:57:57 UTC

I just meant that the last line sounded a lot like a lead in to more awesomeness.

My ideas are pretty basic: how Hikaru finds out that Pavel is a genius, his response to it, what happens when Hikaru has to go home, etc.

Or you could do something a bit more drabble-y and pick up the little thread about the maids thinking of both Hikaru and Pavel as a "curiosity" and do a small series of different scenes of one or both of them doing particularly curious things. I dunno.

I like what you've set up here and I would love to have more of it to enjoy. =D