FIC: Divergence 12/?

[13empress]

Title: Divergence

Rating: Mature ( graphic violence, language, adult themes)

Pairing: pre-slash nu!K/S, kid!K/S

Cast: ensemble, plus Pike, W. Kirk, A. Grayson, and nu!versions of TOS random crew

Keywords: long multi-part fic, kid!Spock, kid!Kirk, time travel, badass!crew, epic friendship

Notes: as a fill for this plotty PROMPT from the kink

Comments

[ferretbaby]

Oh wow your totally teasing me with these lovely cliffhangers arn't you! Poor Spocklet, these kids can't get a break can they. I'm having a feeling that I'm going to like the unforscene consequense for this mindmeld though. This is so lovely

[jademac2442]

HOLY GOD WOMAN! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!

Wow, I sound like Leonard McCoy. Oops. Oh well. Oh please let them not be dead. And Hooray for your exquisite writing? Can there be a kirk pov of that action in a later chapter? It probably wouldn't have made sense in this one.

And you are correct, Spocklet's beating would have in all honesty killed a human of the same age. Not for certain, just likely. and holy shit wow.

Would love some nuSpock reaction/grimace/hopeless look at the prospect of Kirk's death. And I'm a little unclear, the passenger ship got blown up anyway? or is it a new ship that's in distress.

Lemme read it again. Over all impression is shit, well damn, and awesome all at once. *Its a compliment, really*

[jademac2442]

He could taste his own blood, he realized dimly as he dry-retched...it would taste of copper, if you wanted to add description there.

The explosion came suddenly, flaring across the screen and taking out a section of the Romulan vessel’s exotic hull construct....Did kirk make any attempt to hit something important on the Narada?

Out of the corner of her eyes, Spock was sitting on the edge of the command chair, looking like any moment he was going to leap out. In his tight face, she saw shock, confusion, and an almost indescribable expression hidden in the way his lips were poised, as if he were mid-sentence - overwhelmed, she realized, Spock was literally speechless. Slowly he straightened in the command chair, his expression softening for a second before it morphed into his usual blank visage....Holy god. I totally missed this paragraph the first time around. was too deep in shock I guess.

wow, girl. Its no less intense the second time, just so you know

[anonymous]

[13empress]

insistent that it bordered on foolishness? Bordered on? Are you kidding? What fanfic is Spock reading? It borders on reckless insanity. It's way over the line for foolishness. But it's cute the way he thinks that so ...cutely. Its all logical and blinded by love at once. *sigh* so cute.

i'm confused by this O_O
are you saying i should keep it???

[jademac2442]

Yes, you should keep it. It's just funny. Spock's all blinded by his love for Jim, so he is toning down his negative opinions of Jim's behavior. Its adorable. Kirk's recklessness is one of the things we love about Kirk. And Spock's adoration of Kirk's recklessness is one of the things we all love about Spock.

[13empress]

Kaeferia is a specific world there in the Tau Ceti system
it's like Earth is in the Sol System
or Vulcan is in the 40 Eridani/Eridanus system

cos Tau Ceti is human, while Kaeferia is what the native species call that place, i decided that the Romulans, who aren't Feds, use Kaeferia, while Spock would think of it also as the Tau Ceti system (general Federation/earth designation of that place)

[maggie2mw]

OMG please tell me this is a way to get the older Kirk and Bones onto Narada... you can't kill off those two like that!

Suspense...

[13empress]

good guess :D thanks for reading

[culf]

No, poor Spock! Both of them! One dying, one thinking his Captain is dead. They're both pretty broken right now, poor dears. Both Kirks need to take care of their respective Vulcans.

I wonder what happened to Kirk and McCoy. I hope they're okay.

Still going strong. I'm always excited to see an update on this.

[13empress]

thanks for following so diligently :)
yup well... Kirk will come through for Spock you'll see ;p