A Boundary They May Not Cross (gen, PG)

May 28, 2011 11:34

Story Title: A Boundary They May Not Cross
Genre: Gen
Character/Relationships: Amelia and Claire Novak, OCs
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Word Count ~800
A/N: Unbetaed, written for the prompt "Time will tell" at spn_las. Concrit is welcome; anonymous commenting is enabled.

“Do you think I’ll ever be able to fly?” Claire asks Amelia )

rating: pg, fic, spn_las, fic: gen

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kalliel May 28 2011, 19:54:54 UTC
I was talking to some non-voting people, to whom I'd linked or described this story, and we were all thinking, who wrote this, who wrote this?

It's fantastic; Amelia and Claire are such an integral part of the SPN canon, however brief their stay, and I think it's because of the depth and power of the fic that has been written for them, bleeding back into people's perceptions of the characters and coloring them more fully. This story certainly upholds all of these qualities and then some. Great job!

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13chapters May 29 2011, 20:36:20 UTC
Thank you so much! I think of all of the people who have been brushed aside by the greater powers in SPN, I feel the most for Amelia and Claire, who have really lost so much, and ffff it's like Sam and Dean and Cas barely even care, they're so consumed with their own problems.

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tifaching May 28 2011, 20:53:05 UTC
I really loved this. So many awesome stories this time around!

I can see this. Amelia not wanting to even think about what happened, never mind talking about it. And when she does, to a church person no less, she's seen as a nutcase.

And Claire. When she finally begins to talk again, the things she talks about, the dreams she has.

And the end. God, poor Amelia.

Fantastic story!

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13chapters May 29 2011, 20:38:07 UTC
Thank you so much! I do feel bad for hurting Amelia even more than she already has been, but ohhhh what happened to Claire, you know she had to have been horribly affected by that.

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13chapters May 29 2011, 20:46:48 UTC
Thank you so much! I don't think about the Novaks that much either, but I looooooove writing about the effects canon has on the poor steamrolled minor characters.

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landrews May 29 2011, 02:22:25 UTC
I also thought this fic fantastic :-) Definitely horror genre, would be perfect posted at sharper_things. I thought this had a mature depth, a terrific concept, and a real sensitivity for the characters. Skillfully written, efficient and subtle, but fleshed out enough to carry the reader through to it's open conclusion. I really enjoyed reading it :-)

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13chapters May 29 2011, 20:49:10 UTC
Oh man, what a wonderful comment. Thank you so much!

Yeah, the ending. I have an idea of what happens to Claire, but I wanted to leave it open to the reader.

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lexhibition May 29 2011, 03:41:45 UTC
“Can I take swimming lessons, Mom?”

Heartbreaking. I love it. There's this perfect pitch to hit with Novak fic that just expresses all the horror of being collateral damage, and your Amelia pov is perfect at that.

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13chapters May 29 2011, 20:51:21 UTC
Thank you so much! Was it you that I talked to when I decided to write this? I remember saying that in celebration of SPN being renewed, I was going to write horror about the Novaks. And then this happened. :D

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