There With You: Part 13

[13_degrees_eros]

Title: There With You - PART THIRTEEN
Pairing: AJ/Soohyun
Rating: Alas, we are back to PG-13
Summary: AJ and Soohyun slowly make their way out of the dorm.

Comments

[justzoni]

Yet again, I get to wake up and read another one of your delightful chapters before heading out to retail hell. And what a chapter it was!

I don't think I've ever seen so much innuendo packed into so many words before. *laughs* This was actually a delight to read, though I'll admit I'm rather surprised that you managed to rein it in to PG-13.

I really do love the way that you have AJ and Soohyun interacting. I enjoy seeing how much they mean to each other, and it's great to know that they want something for the long term. It's a shame AJ hasn't thought of doing something a little more permanent of than a hickey to let Soohyun remember that he's not alone. Call me a romantic, if an unrealistic one.

I am very much looking forward to the evening with Ronan and friends. I hope it isn't too much for Soohyun, but I'm sure they'll do fine.

You guys write an enchanting story. Thank you.

[13_degrees_eros]

Oh goodness, I've never worked retail, but I can imagine. Glad to brighten your day!
Heh heh yeah. No one grabbed anyone's dick, so it could be PG-13. O_o >_< lol Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks, this chapter was fun to write. Oh yeah, what were you hoping for? A tattoo? :P Or... a ring? Hehe, you are a romantic indeed. I guess AJ's not quite that cheesy yet. But there's still time...
What, Ronan's always tame, what are you taking about? hehe ^_~

Thanks so much!

[justzoni]

Rating definitions are so iffy, aren't they? Heh.

Honestly, that's a tough question - Soohyun isn't one for tattoos, and he doesn't wear jewelry much outside of performances. lol. "Here's a vaguely pirate-themed t-shirt to remember our love by." would be worse. I have no idea. Just seems like a shame.

Honestly, Ronan is the first OC in this fandom that hasn't driven me up a wall. He's a lot of fun. Hats off to you for that.

[13_degrees_eros]

Yep. >_< I wasn't positive about rating this chapter, I guess there was lots of nudity but no one cares about that in written form... Ah well, everyone already knows what they're in for in this story. ^_~
hahaha, well right now he has AJ's boxers to remember him by, that'll have to do. :P
Ronan... just kind of happened. We were determined not to make him just a boring OC, so we gave him some background... and then an evil plot... and it took off from there. I always love writing him, maybe too much, and I'm glad you like him too.

[silverstorm666]

You guys are amazing, as always.

I think this chapter really finalized how much Soohyun and AJ have fallen in love, and that they both want something long lasting and heartfelt. And also the realities of the harsh world they live in, back in Korea, where their every move is scrutinized.

I think my favorite part is when Soohyun walks around the room, reliving memories. And then capturing them as pictures. How often in our lives do we do that? Hold onto something with relatively little value, and yet we often cling to it for longer than we should because it holds so many memories engraved in its surface.

I feel like I should make a more insightful comment but my head's pounding so I'll just end with saying how much I really enjoyed this chapter.

[13_degrees_eros]

Thank you so much, as always. <3
Yeah, the boys finally allowed some blood move to their brains so they could think with them! derp >_< But yes, a little more reflection in this chapter, glad you liked it.
That part was all Zoroyoh. ^_^ Yeah, we make and use our own symbols... and hold onto them... even when they're the only thing that's left. Luckily Soohyun will have the real thing to hold on to most of the time.
Hope your head was better today.

[ext_1924091]

Um, I'm korean fan of U-KISS, so my English might not be perfect, sorry for that.

I very like AJ/Soohyun fics, but in Korean web those are very rare(in fact, U-KISS fics are rare in Korean web...:-[), so I googled 'AJ/Soohyun' and I found this fic. I think this fic is...perfect. All parts are very nice. AJ and Soohyun are very cute. they are very sweet, they are very hot, and I think they are one of the best couple in this world! I was very impressed by the parts which described when they are apart from each other. Their depression made me think that they were deeply fall in love... Oh, I will have to read this fic once more... It is very nice fic!

I am very curious that you guys(I saw in part one that you are two people) will keep writing this fic. I'm eager to see next part, but I can see that you guys stoped posting from may 16th(yes, I mean this posting). If you already decided to stop writing, it would be sad but still thank you to write this perfect fic. If you are in keep writing, I'm very pleased of that!

[13_degrees_eros]

Sorry for not responding to this before, I was just so in shock that someone in Korea was actually reading this fic... Thank you so much! And your English is good, don't worry!

We do mean to finish this fic, it's just going slowly because of the other things happening in our lives. But after posting today, there should be one more chapter! Please look forward to it~ And again, thank you so much!

[anonymous]

WHERE IS MY CHAPTER 14 ☹

[13_degrees_eros]

Up now! Patience, my friend. *pats* Thanks for your enthusiasm. :D