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Fic: Follow You Home - California Queen (3/20)

Jun 19, 2008 12:59

Title: Follow You Home - California Queen (3/20)
Author: Erin (erinm_4600)
Characters, Pairing: Cain and DG, but if you saw 'em in the miniseries, they're here or mentioned. Plus some OCs
Rating: PG
Summary: DG left the Zone. Cain followed.
Warning: post-series. Blame n_e_star, for she fed Steve. ;)
Disclaimer: The original characters belong to L. Frank Baum and ( Read more... )

series: caliqueen (fyh), fic: tin man, series: follow you home

Comments 44

n_e_star June 19 2008, 17:15:37 UTC

Oh my lord! You are awesome!!!

erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:19:15 UTC

right back atcha ;)

tinpra June 19 2008, 17:15:47 UTC

*wiping away those tears of excitement* It's a good thing my desk is out of the way or everyone in the office would be asking me what's wrong.

Anywho, I am so glad you brought up the silence issue, cuz I was sure gonna. Loving the internal thoughts. And yet Cain and DG still manage to play off each other, even understand each other in a strange, albeit incomplete, way.

Oooooh! *flails* My fangirlish heart is on my sleeve. I'm gonna stop gushing now.

erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:18:08 UTC

glad you like the silence... next chapter's full of it, too.

They just wouldn't talk to each other...
*shrugs*

tinpra June 19 2008, 17:34:56 UTC

Characters can be willful that way can't they? I actually noticed it in the last chappie.

erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:39:51 UTC

I had written about 10 pages before I realized they hadn't spoken... so I went back and added the little bits here and there...

Of course, in that situation, they probably wouldn't talk... because that's just them :p

Thread 5

gatechic June 19 2008, 17:19:53 UTC

I liked how Cain took advantage of the books in the library and was doing some research.

Poor Cain, he's really out of his element isn't he? Which makes for a cute Confused!Cain. :D

erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:21:50 UTC

*swoons at image of NealCain in a library*

THUD!

gatechic June 19 2008, 17:40:27 UTC

lol...

To me, it's definitely something Cain would do even if it is out of curiosity. I also liked how he looked back at the book; as if he wanted to look at it more. :D

erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:41:46 UTC

Funny you should say that....

*actually, I think he wasn't sure about leaving it out*

But... that's another story for another time....

;)

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erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:49:01 UTC

*bows*
*offers cookies*

averypartofme June 19 2008, 17:25:47 UTC

Again, with the causing me to flail.

I love how they haven't said, like, a word to each other. It makes it that much more powerful and will make it that much more special when they do.

So, basically, what I'm saying is, this is an awesome chapter.

Oh, I almost forgot al;kdjfklajlJLAKJDFKJALDKJFKLAJDFJKkjflkajdflkj

erinm_4600 June 19 2008, 17:31:39 UTC

You are so weird....

*squishes*