Fic: Barfight

[erinm_4600]

Title: Barfight
Author: Erin (erinm_4600)
Characters, Pairing: Adora and Jack (mention of the Chief and some random Zonians)
Rating: G
Summary: Following a barfight, two of the Tin Men-in-training brood in jail.
Warning: pre-series, Tin Man!Adora 'verse. *Written for Round 34 of prompt-in-a-box. Round 29, Prompt: "He insulted you. I hit him. Seemed like the thing to do.

Comments

[miller0259]

I feel like we're missing too much of what happened...almost...maybe...hmmmm...

[erinm_4600]

When I first had the conversation, it was more funny than anything. As I started to type it, though, somebody got grabby. Steve's trying to make everything dramatic lately o.O

[miller0259]

Ooohhh I see...I didn't mean to make it seem like it wasn't funny/cute by the way, it is! I notice now that I didn't mention that. *headdesk*

Drama does make the story move forward I suppose...

[erinm_4600]

Oh, no - you were fine. Just over-sharing writing drama :D

[gatechic]

So...what happened with the Chief?

[erinm_4600]

I'm actually working on that... :)

He'll pull a Costner and take them back to the bar to start another fight. *snort* /kidding

[gatechic]

\o/

*snickers*

[klcthebookworm]

If he doesn't Adora's grandfather should. :D

[bizarra]

Nicely done. :)

I love the voices you have created here. :)

[erinm_4600]

Why thanks!

I have to admit, for as much as they never told anyone what happened, I expected it to be a bit.. funnier.. of a story o.O

[bizarra]

Sometimes these things happen. :)

[erinm_4600]

Indeed....