Fic: "Taste" (Majin Tantei Nougami Neuro, Neuro/Yako, R18)

[12gatsunohime]

...well, this started a couple of days ago, much shorter and much more to the point. Then last night I had a dream that scared me so badly I had no choice but to fic it. Everything about this mystery, except for Neuro and Yako's presence (and it taking place in Japan), comes straight from my subconscious, with which it seems I really need to have a

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[crescent_moony]

ASDFGHJK~ <3

OMG, that mystery. That was disgusting. :'D I love it~ so Sweeny Todd, mwahaha... And I love how you foreshadowed it and everything! Delicious. /lame pun

AND THE NEUROxYAKO AT THE END~ <3 I really loved their interaction throughout the fic (calling her his "favorite" mud rat and stuff, d'awww~) but of course the lemon was the cherry on top, as they say. <3

Also, yea for including Godai! :'D The boy needs more love. X3

[12gatsunohime]

Not gonna lie, I laughed out loud at "That was disgusting. I love it." XD WHAT'S A STORY BY ME THESE DAYS WITHOUT CANNIBALISM, I MEAN REALLY? XD Seriously, though, I had an utterly horrifying dream that went exactly like this, and when I woke myself up right before I got killed and then tried to go back to sleep, THE DREAM CONTINUED. WHAT.

I really, really, really love these two. They're just so...I don't even know how to explain it. They're kind of perfect. I had tons of fun with this. ^_^

MINOR CHARACTER LOVE. :D Godai is awesome. I friend-ship him with Yako really hard.

[neocloud9]

I really, really, really love these two. They're just so...I don't even know how to explain it. They're kind of perfect.

YESSSSSSSSS~

[crescent_moony]

IT'S NOT A STORY WORTH TELLING IF THERE IS NO CANNIBALISM. XD OMG, that dream would have scared the crap out of me... ^^;

THEY ARE SO PERFECT. OH MY GOSH. IT'S JUST... LYKE... OMG. <3

And this. So much this. <3

[neocloud9]

THAT ENDING OH MY GOD THAT ENDING I LOVE IT SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA

And what a great mystery, very well thought out! It really fit in with the rest of canon...

I loved how protective Neuro was of Yako and yet how understated it was. Perfect!

AND. Y'KNOW. THAT ENDING. HNNNNNNNNNG~

[12gatsunohime]

The ending was the first idea I came up with but I refused to post it as it was because I was just like GOD DAMN IT HIME YOU ARE NOT WRITING ANOTHER 3AM PWP. So it turned into a 5 am porn WITH plot. XD;;

Oh, thank you. I guess my waking up an hour early scared to death came to some good. ^_^

Do not mess with his mud rat; you will live to regret it. ಠ_ಠ

[neocloud9]

I was specifically talking about Neuro giving Yako a kiss on the forehead while she slept, BUT THE PORN WAS AMAZING TOO.

I liked how you wove the clues in so subtly, too. I'd have never given that mail truck a second thought...

HE WILL WATCH YOU FROM THE ROOFTOP LIKE MOTHERFUCKING BATMAN.

[12gatsunohime]

RIGHT I WROTE THAT TOO, DIDN'T I? I should really start, you know, remembering what comes out of my brain. *headdesk*

See, I thought I was being obvious, but that's probably because I already knew everything.

PFFFFFFFFFFFFFsomeoneneedstodrawthat.

[lizzie8d]

asdkjaslkdjkalsdk this was kind of amazing

KIND OF REALLY AMAZING

[12gatsunohime]

:D Thank you so much~!

[mukku_fan]

ASDFGHJKL! That was amazing. The mystery (disgusting and lovely all at the same time), the sex, the everything! Gah. *A*

[12gatsunohime]

Thank you! ^_^ I'm really glad you liked it. [Also, that icon is perfect. XD]

[mukku_fan]

[I thought you would enjoy it. I personally love it much too much, and probably overuse it. BUT IT IS SO KYUTE~]

[hakinechan]

This was... so good. ALL OF IT. THE MYSTERY. THE PROTECTIVENESS. THE NOT-FIRST-KISS. THE PASSION. THE SEXY TIEMUS.
I loved it all. ♥
Superb jobbbb =u= ♥♥♥

[12gatsunohime]

Oh, thank you~! I really like it when I get more than one thing right. XD