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On the ninth day of Christmas

Jan 03, 2016 17:36

my true love gave to me

nine recorded happenings

[Title] Ghosts in the Machine
[Rating] G
[Fandom] Portal
[Notes/Summary] Chell didn't want records kept of her. Not at first.

( If there are no records of your presence, then you can disappear )

versipellis, battle royale, jet set radio, death note, akira, malory towers/battle royale, malory towers, portal

Comments 4

sabethea January 4 2016, 10:59:26 UTC

OH GODS JUNE. I can't even... afterwards, trying to cope with everything. And torn between "I won" and "OMG, what? What?" and "It's all changed."

The Akira three were really interesting. I loved the totally different mood of them all, and the way they fed into each other.

Shuuya mouthing along because there were kids asleep is just adorable. And Coin's thoughts about music and its continuation and yet difference. The Portal one, and the thought of not ever existing if you didn't have something solid to prove it. And the difference between what Sayu watches in the day and what she watches at night. (A bit like me reading old school stories during the day and NC17 fanfiction in the evenings sometimes!)

June. And that fabulous MT/BR fic which this was a spin off from. Oh. *goes back and re-reads June's story*

versipellis January 5 2016, 07:35:02 UTC

Aaaah, so glad you liked! Really wanted to make it work but felt writing her in angsty mode is actually quite difficult. (I recently reread my own fic and was like, "man, I was not kind to these girls. Battle Royales are never OK" ^^)

I was really pleased with the Akira three, they came out differently from how I expected but that was kind of nice!

*pats Shuuya* Aaah, I'm really glad you liked this day, I am very fond of it actually ^^

lycoris January 5 2016, 20:26:40 UTC

I love the Portal one, even though I don't know the canon very well.

Oh, the wonderful Shuuya one where he's got his camera, that was great! And the Akira one was so interesting!

Ooooh, the Malory Towers/Battle Royale one. That's such a good extra coda, I love it. It's so harsh and difficult and DAMMIT MISS GRAYLING. >:(

And Sayu! Poor Sayu. I love that that's how she deals with things.

Really good!

versipellis January 6 2016, 07:46:46 UTC

Thank you!

*cuddles Shuuya and his dorky friends* I had forgotten how much I like writing friends being friends and messing about ;)

I'm really glad you think the coda works, it was quite a late-on idea!

I would've liked to do more with the Sayu idea but it didn't happen. Still, after all the horror game Let's Playing this year I was inspired ;)

Thanks again! ^____^