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12avocados

sin título part 1/?

Jul 17, 2009 01:03

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Title: sin título part 1/?

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

Rating: 14-ish maybe? I'm no good with ratings.

Disclaimer: Please, if I owned these characters I'd never have had to write this. No infringement meant, I make no profit, etc. I have great respect for the actors who did an brilliant job portraying ( Read more... )

it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, ficity fic, lhdp

Comments 21

raven_bard July 17 2009, 05:03:02 UTC

Ok I kinda cried whilst reading this because I'm still a mess from that damned season finale. But you have such a great beginning. I hope you continue! Please?

12avocados July 17 2009, 05:11:31 UTC

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Just keep repeating to yourself over and over "she just fainted, she just fainted. It's all going to be okay." I find it helps. ;)

Maybe I'll edit three to two there in the first line and let Montoya live too. He may be useful later.

raven_bard July 17 2009, 05:26:04 UTC

Si, si. When i watching the episode I kept chanting in my head "it's just a dream, a bad, bad dream." Then I kept rewinding the episode hoping that my eyes were simply playing tricks on me. *shakes head* I finally gave up after rewinding the damn episode for a good 5 minutes straight cuz the sight of Silvia lying there was making me sick.

curlygrrl75 July 17 2009, 05:18:09 UTC

Yes please continue....this was moving...really hit me

xejanfan July 17 2009, 05:49:08 UTC

god, this was beautiful. you captured their silent connection, their instinctive knowledge of what each of them needs, perfectly. thank you so much, please please continue with their story! i want to watch them heal each other as only they can.

12avocados July 17 2009, 20:19:28 UTC

Thank you! I will try to continue. I have part of chapter 2 plotted out in my head right now.

lenageek July 17 2009, 05:58:16 UTC

This was wonderful! So sweet and reaffirming of their love after the horrors of the wedding day! Please write more! (Sorry, newbie here dying to read more fanfic like this since even as a casual Pepsi fan, I was torn to shreads by that finale!)

12avocados July 17 2009, 20:20:27 UTC

Thanks! I'm going to continue.

av8rwinn July 17 2009, 06:10:20 UTC

I like this. I was crying while reading this. so please continue.

12avocados July 17 2009, 20:22:12 UTC

I cried a little writing it. Then I cried again when I reread it after putting it up and found so many typos!