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12avocados

the letter, part 3/?

Jan 18, 2010 00:53

Title: The Letter 3/?
Pairing: They're working on it
Rating: 18
Spoilers: To episode 86
Disclaimer: I don't own these characters or claim to own them. I make no profit except the happiness of occasionally making their little fictional lives better. No infringement intended, standard disclaimer, etc., etc.

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my emo brings all the girls to the yard, so damn long it's practically a novel, ficity fic, lhdp

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trickydaos January 18 2010, 10:56:24 UTC

Poor Pepa.... and how my heart breaks when I read about the ring *sniff*
Love how detailed you describe the flashbacks. So tender and sexy...they're so in love...
So, will you be following the canon story, or make this fic (semi) AU?

12avocados January 18 2010, 15:10:16 UTC

Glad you like the flashbacks! There's a whole year we didn't see that canon alluded to being a happy one, so there's always room for a lot of them. I started writing this and wrote the outline before we found out what happened in canon, so I'd say mostly AU and in the end lacking in any incidents involving spoon surgery.

pepsilove64 January 18 2010, 12:16:27 UTC

Yes Poor Pepa. Great, long chapter thanks.
I like the story so far and the way you write
I wonder about Silvia how she is feeling
Maybe a chapter from Silvia's point of view

12avocados January 18 2010, 15:23:39 UTC

Thanks! This chapter was so long, I had to cut it down. The next chapter goes back to Silvia. She has a letter to read.

girlechick January 18 2010, 19:12:28 UTC

Wow! That was an amazing chapter. Absolutely fantastic writing!
All I want to do is give Pepa a big hug and tell her everything is gonna be ok.
REALLY looking forward to the next update!

12avocados January 23 2010, 02:03:03 UTC

Thanks! Pepa just needs to hold on a little longer. Silvia will come to her senses I think.

I'm hoping to have another update next week, but I have a chapter of Sin Titulo to finish first. We'll see how it goes.

hola chica! sumatrabean January 19 2010, 03:34:23 UTC

That WAS a long chapter. And I loved the way that you described Venice. That's going on my list. After reading this story, I need to see Venice. (Portugal is already on it.) I also liked how you described Silvia. Pepa is hot, but everyone dreams of Silvia. Silvia and lingerie. At least it seems that way to me.

Oh, and I like the sex. Not potential sex with the blonde girl. (Yay for friends without benefits!!) But real sex with Silvia. (Either Pepa or me would be fine.) Let's have more sex. :)

Re: hola chica! 12avocados January 23 2010, 02:06:30 UTC

It was outrageously long, and I think the next chapter looks to be just as long if I follow the whole outline. Glad you liked the lingerie. I was more explicit than I normally am, but everyone deserves a reward for putting up with my slow updating!

swiftlyreloaded January 19 2010, 07:11:09 UTC

Fantastic chapter your attention to the details is phenomenal.
I really feel sorry for Pepa but am really curious about that letter she wrote
Silvia & Sil's reaction to it.

12avocados January 23 2010, 02:46:53 UTC

Thank you, and thanks for continuing to read it! I won't torture everyone with the wait for the letter much longer. Silvia will remember she has it in the next chapter.