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12avocados

the letter, part 2/?

Jan 06, 2010 20:05

Title: The Letter 2/?
Pairing: Our heroines of course
Rating: 15
Spoilers: To episode 86
Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters or claim to own them. I make no profit except the happiness of occasionally making their little fictional lives better, no infringement intended, standard disclaimer stuff, etc., etc.
Note: Yes, I stole and slightly altered ( Read more... )

my emo brings all the girls to the yard, ficity fic, lhdp

Comments 23

vickiheartpepsi January 7 2010, 02:00:29 UTC

Wow....GO LOLA!!!! xD
i really lyk wer this is going:)
keep it up!

12avocados January 8 2010, 02:45:05 UTC

Lola always knows what to say! Glad you like it. There will more of this story, and it will be dramatic.

tarada2 January 7 2010, 02:32:20 UTC

God I love Lola so much!
I was so glad to find Silvia going to her sisters' for solace. Lola was my favorite character in the series (apart from Silvia and Pepa, of course!). I've always loved the relationship they had, how Silvia always felt lost without her sister... You've really captured her warmth, her sensitivity... and her voice! I could hear Adriana Ozores as I read your dialogue!
Lola's arguments seemed pretty convincing to me... "Tell me,do you feel free? "
And that bit with Paco hyperventilating just cracked me up!
Bravo!
Can't wait to see what's coming!
Funny! As I'm writing this, I can see you've just posted a comment on my story!

12avocados January 8 2010, 02:47:35 UTC

When I was writing the Lola and Paco scene especially I could see in my head the mannerisms she'd given the character. I wanted to write them in but since this is first person it wouldn't have worked. I'm glad some of the character came through though, and thanks!

av8rwinn January 7 2010, 04:29:54 UTC

Yup, Yup, Lola is awesome.
I like this story, the untold.

12avocados January 8 2010, 02:48:10 UTC

It was the beginning of the end once Lola was gone. What can I say? The producer is insane.

change_theend January 7 2010, 05:20:01 UTC

Awesome Lola chapter!
It was a really nice read and I'm enjoying this so much.
Great job and I can't wait for the next addition!

12avocados January 8 2010, 02:48:40 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy you're enjoying it. There will be more to come.

swiftlyreloaded January 7 2010, 06:02:12 UTC

AWSOME job! Lola REALLY was a GREAT character. Loved what she said to Silvia "do you feel free?"

12avocados January 8 2010, 02:49:31 UTC

Thank you! Lola was a great character. It was never quite the same without her.