the letter, part 1/?

[12avocados]

I've rewritten part 6 of sin título/untitled at least two times already and I'm not happy with it yet. So here's something a little different begun a long time ago, alternate universe now, but at the time I first had the outline in my head it was speculative. I thought of reworking some of it to return to canon, but I decided I like the outline I

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[girlechick]

That was some truly powerful writing there!
I loved this chapter so much, that as soon as I'd finished reading it the first time, I started reading it again!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

[12avocados]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it well enough to read it twice. I'm almost finished with the next chapter, so keep your fingers crossed that I will get it up soon. I'm aiming to be a better updater, we'll see how it goes!

[angie005]

Making the rounds!! I'm catching up on fanfics I missed readin while real life was taking a toll. Before I read this one, I was going to make it my last one before I go back to my "real work" and I'm glad I did.

That Pepa is a smooth one: "Silvia's smile" *Swoon* Or would it be the the writer that should be considered the smooth one? Either way, I love this intro... not so much the memory of PepSi huge fight but hey, that's what relationships are.

Thank yo for giving me something fill in the gaps between Pepa and Silvia's fight. I wonder what Pepa did during her week off. She did come back fairly somber =(

[12avocados]

Glad you got the chance to read this one, and liked it. I'm trying to get the next chapter up, but real life is taking its toll on me too. A few more days I think.

Pepa is pretty smooth, and I thought that was the kind of thing that was so silly it was cute. And the fight was awful, but who knows? That may make the getting back together all that much sweeter!