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12avocados

the letter, part 1/?

Dec 18, 2009 18:02

I've rewritten part 6 of sin título/untitled at least two times already and I'm not happy with it yet. So here's something a little different begun a long time ago, alternate universe now, but at the time I first had the outline in my head it was speculative. I thought of reworking some of it to return to canon, but I decided I like the outline I ( Read more... )

my emo brings all the girls to the yard, ficity fic, lhdp

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sumatrabean December 19 2009, 02:03:13 UTC

See, poetic. Sweet and poetic. I loved it! But who the *bleep* is this woman who's going to open the door for her any time day or night? Judging from her past, I'm pretty sure it's not her mother....

Wouldn't it be wonderful to ring in the New Year knowing the answer to that question?

12avocados December 21 2009, 13:48:04 UTC

Thanks! She is definitely not her mother, and you might get lucky with the timing. I'll try to take it as a challenge.

vickiheartpepsi December 19 2009, 03:16:30 UTC

i really love it,it's really unique.
and now i'm curious >.<....update soon???...preettty please??? :)
thnx for it btw :D

12avocados December 21 2009, 13:52:12 UTC

Glad you like it! The next part should be finished soon, I hope. :)

av8rwinn December 19 2009, 03:18:39 UTC

Hi love,
OK. I will have to read this on another computer where I can focus. But how can you leave me like this, danging with curiosity. Are you punishing me? UHGGGG

12avocados December 21 2009, 13:53:34 UTC

Hola! I'll try to leave you hanging for too long, but you know me. I do have the majority of it planned and outlined though.

trickydaos December 19 2009, 09:41:08 UTC

I love this kind of in-between fics. It irks me to no end that the show had so many gaps in their relationship. But I realized that this also give fans a chance to use their imagination to fill the blanks :)
I *heart* the flashbacks, do you have more fics about it? Would love to read it in more detailed version hehehe...
I'm looking forward for this, you've sparked my curiousity.
Now I'm off to read more, have to catch up on all the fics ;)

12avocados December 21 2009, 15:03:51 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm a fan of flashbacks too, and there are many gaps to fill to keep us going for awhile. I'm using quite a few of them in my Sin Título story, including something on the Portuguese holiday, so you might like that one. There's an index that should stay as the top entry on my main journal page now, and if you click on the journal title, the links to all the parts of the three stories that are here so far should be there.

kiarcheo December 19 2009, 17:47:15 UTC

What the letter says? And with who Pepa is staying? I'm so curious!

I can't wait for the next chapert and anything else you may write

12avocados December 21 2009, 14:40:48 UTC

All shall be revealed! But slowly, I like a story that goes on and on. :)