sin título part 5/?

Sep 06, 2009 00:57


Title: sin título, part 5/?
Pairing: still the same
Rating: 18
Disclaimer: please, if I owned these characters, I would never have had to write this. No infringement intended. I make no profit, etc.
Spoilers: unavoidable

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it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, so damn long it's practically a novel, ficity fic, needs a better title than untitled, pretty much romantic smut, lhdp

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av8rwinn September 6 2009, 04:36:35 UTC
I finished this with ease. Love it. My eyes got blurry and my body got hot near the end.

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12avocados September 8 2009, 03:14:24 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it!

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lenageek September 6 2009, 04:58:27 UTC
OMG, I was so happy when I saw you'd updated! I loved Silvia's description of how their bodies fit together perfectly and how Pepa kissed Silvia's scars - made me go 'aww!'and all mushy inside! This is so incredibly tender and sweet - keep writing more please! :D

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12avocados September 8 2009, 03:17:05 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the comment! I'm such a slow updater, but I'll try to keep writing.

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junebuggy01 September 6 2009, 05:46:30 UTC
God I was so happy when I saw that you updated and for sure was not disappointed that is was long! I love how you write so sensually, without it becoming smutty. Just pure love y'know. And I teared at Silvia's thought of her friends buying the bowl and being excited about it. AHHHH, I don't know you and your story are just love! Please don't be gone that long again. (Unless you must)

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12avocados September 8 2009, 03:25:36 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes I worry it reads like a bad romance novel! Thanks as always for your comment and I'll do my best to update soon.

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rocky_fan September 6 2009, 10:22:23 UTC
I really, really love this, it's so niece to read, how they "heal" slowly from the trauma, thanks avocados!

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12avocados September 8 2009, 03:26:22 UTC
Thank you. Glad you're liking it!

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selinakris September 6 2009, 10:37:45 UTC
You write this story so beautifully, glad you have updated it again, can't wait to read more.

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12avocados September 8 2009, 03:28:28 UTC
Thanks!

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