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12avocados

sin título part 4/?

Aug 16, 2009 21:58

Title: sin título part 4/?
Pairing: Only one guess allowed
Rating: almost 18 but not quite
Disclaimer: Please, if I owned these characters I'd never have had to write this. No infringement meant, I make no profit, etc. I have great respect for the actors who did a brilliant job portraying that other ending. No offence is meant to them in changing ( Read more... )

it's okay kids she lives, assuaging our suffering, part 4 is a tease, ficity fic, needs a better title than untitled, lhdp

Comments 38

lovelyafterglow August 17 2009, 01:31:19 UTC

Dude. Weird. I was just about to send you a message to see how you were doing! Glad to see you've updated...I'm gonna actually go and read it now. :-P

lovelyafterglow August 17 2009, 01:40:12 UTC

And it was great!! I was really missing your gorgeous writing.

But...why oh why do they always get interrupted when things are just getting good?!?! :-P

Looking forward to the next update! (Also, I love your tags...part 4 is definitely a damn tease.)

12avocados August 17 2009, 17:00:32 UTC

Thanks! Eventually they might find themselves with some uninterrupted time, so don't give up yet. :)

lovelyafterglow August 17 2009, 21:09:33 UTC

And I just realized I had already commented on how much I love your tags...so much time had gone by, I had forgotten, ha. Sorry for being repetitive (but I do love your tags :-P).

And, don't worry, I would never give up on this story...no matter how many times you may deem it necessary to have them interrupted. :D

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av8rwinn August 17 2009, 01:32:12 UTC

you're kidding. ending it there? omg!!! MORE soon please.

12avocados August 17 2009, 17:01:50 UTC

Hahaha!! I will try to be more speedy with the next update.

slayergirl13 August 17 2009, 03:03:42 UTC

Excellent story and beautifully written. I'm looking forward to the next part.

12avocados August 17 2009, 17:02:06 UTC

Thank you!

swiftlyreloaded August 17 2009, 04:25:56 UTC

you are an talented author you completely had my imagination runnin on high THANX (now i need to go get the extinguisher)

12avocados August 17 2009, 17:02:24 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

lenageek August 17 2009, 04:45:07 UTC

I was so happy to see your update tonight as I've loved this story from the beginning! It's nice that despite the challenges and the angst, at least Silvia has her Pepa with her this time - until they get interrupted. Geez, again?! Seriously, how many times can ill timing happen? Don't leave us hanging! ;D

12avocados August 17 2009, 17:03:09 UTC

Thank you! Interruptions are canon, so I had to throw one in somewhere.

lenageek August 17 2009, 18:43:19 UTC

LOL, interruptions are cannon, but we wish is wasn't so!

I loved the little details in this story btw, especially the part about the trip to Portugal and the memories the scent of oranges brings back to Silvia - very lovely to read!

12avocados August 19 2009, 00:06:26 UTC

Thanks! That Portugal thing was actually part of another story I wrote so there's a long version. I pilfered it for this, but maybe I'll come back to it.