Title: Pirates in Tom's Cove Author: Crystal Rose of Pollux (rose_of_polluxClaim: Where in the World is Carmen Sandiego? (The Dying Informant
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(For some reason I thought you would be posting this to 30 Hugs, so I was rather confused to not see it there. XD)
I gave a pretty lengthy review on the original version, so I'm not sure I can think of much new to add.... I like how you fixed up those couple of places near the end, though. X3 And the ending bit is such squee! ^O^ I adore how the Inspector's simple yet powerful words bring the Informant to his senses and he comes back to the others. And I love the Techie's response to the Informant's hug and his declaration that the Techie won't lose his best friend. ♥
(Oh, **headdesk**... the server was so slow yesterday because of other areas losing power that I forgot about crossposting it to 30 Hugs... is is too late to crosspost it there now...?)
XD **hugs the squee** Reading your fics really helped me to write for the Techie better. (I can't believe how I wrote the Techie not reacting too much to the Informant's apparent betrayal in "Troubled Waters"... XD)
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I gave a pretty lengthy review on the original version, so I'm not sure I can think of much new to add.... I like how you fixed up those couple of places near the end, though. X3 And the ending bit is such squee! ^O^ I adore how the Inspector's simple yet powerful words bring the Informant to his senses and he comes back to the others. And I love the Techie's response to the Informant's hug and his declaration that the Techie won't lose his best friend. ♥
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XD **hugs the squee** Reading your fics really helped me to write for the Techie better. (I can't believe how I wrote the Techie not reacting too much to the Informant's apparent betrayal in "Troubled Waters"... XD)
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**doesn't remember too much of how that part went.** XD; But yay for writing him better! X3
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X3 **hugs the Techie**
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