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108am

And They Lived Happily Ever After

Feb 19, 2011 18:50

Fandom: U-KISS
Rating: R
Genre: Horror
Pairing: Kibum/Dongho
Word Count: 1588
Summary He is the big bad wolf in fairy tales, but when he’s gone, the story is over.

Prompt: 15. Protect Me

Warnings: Graphic violence, lack of ethics, major mindfuck.

Author's Note: Hello, challenge I’ve neglected since November. What is this shit, idek. ;__;

( And They Lived Happily Ever After )

( length: one-shot, music: u-kiss, # challenges

Comments 21

s2_otter February 20 2011, 04:55:53 UTC

Dongho killed Kibum >___>
I don't know who is more scary now :( Dongho or Kibum >__>"
Ah, such animal abuse is bad :S
But you write so well I didn't want to stop :3
Am I a closet sadist? XD

y0naki_x3 February 22 2011, 01:48:56 UTC

I really hate animal abuse, so...I kind of hate myself for this. :x

If you're a closet sadist, then I must be one as well. Aha, why did I write this ;____;

s2_otter February 22 2011, 09:05:05 UTC

:S
Gotcha. Ikr, luckily in my country, I don't see nor know them?
I don't go searching for them either because I'm afraid of gore >___>

BECAUSE "PROTECT ME" IS SUCH A FLUFFY PROMPT YOU WANTED TO WRITE SOMETHING OUT OF NORM
Aha, Idk?
BUT SRSLY.

y0naki_x3 February 23 2011, 02:19:21 UTC

XD Unfortunately for me, the animal channel here no longer focuses solely on animal documentaries...They have programs about animal abuse that seems to air 24/7. Rather depressing, especially since I used to love this channel when I was a kid. T___T

XDD I think that is the answer. Meh, fluff kind of sickens me...even though I do have a sizable amount of fluffy stories. :x

brandnewwind February 20 2011, 18:46:29 UTC

OMIGOD ;O;

KLDJFHLSKAJDFHLSKDJFHLSKDJFHLSKD I HAVE NO COHERENCY AT THE MOMENT, BUT, SADFHLSDJFKSDJFÇLKSDJ THIS WAS SUPERB. OMG. REALLY, THE WHOLE PROGRESSION OF THE STORY OTL

AWESOME, JUST AWESOME ♥

Stop killing Kibum, though )':

y0naki_x3 February 22 2011, 01:50:39 UTC

XD Thank you~

Stop killing Kibum, though )':

I honestly don't know why I keep doing this to him. He's one of my top 3 favorites, but why self, why DDD:

babyblue0505 February 21 2011, 01:05:58 UTC

like this fic :x the ending is soooo suprising, i've though that Ho baby would turn to tbe next Bummie's toy, and then... ^^! but u led Bummie be killed.

i want to translate your fic and repost it in vietnamese U-kiss fansite, is that ok? i really want to introduce this fic to my friend there

y0naki_x3 February 22 2011, 01:53:46 UTC

I'm glad my twist ending came out fine! Since, you know, as a writer, it's kind of hard to know whether or not your twist endings actually work >___>

I'm sorry, but at the moment, I'm not really comfortable with having any of my stories translated and reposted. I hope you can understand.

babyblue0505 February 22 2011, 13:08:20 UTC

Sure, I understand ^^ no problem, I'll ask for your permission later
Thanx for replying me :X

its_klutzilla February 21 2011, 23:06:52 UTC

OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD ( ... )

y0naki_x3 February 22 2011, 02:00:32 UTC

XDD I'm glad this satisfied your hunger! Honestly, I kind of hope I'll be able to write something more psychological in the future; it's kind of my guilty pleasure. :3

Originally, I imagined Kibum would be more...unstable, but somehow I made him sort of...unbalanced with a hint of childishness?

Psychotic!maknae is probably another guilty pleasure of mine. 8D I just know those built up abuse from their hyung would someday manifest themselves into something like this. Except this story is not really related to anything in the previous sentence. Shut up already, self, you're starting to babble now. orz

I swear, I'll probably slap myself if I kill off Kibum again. ...HE'S JUST UNFORTUNATE. ;A;

its_klutzilla February 22 2011, 05:26:00 UTC

Psychological is like the happiest genre I could possibly find myself in (I didn't do countless studies on criminal psych for nothing) But, i can just never find the right plaot to go with their personalities, because I dont want to alter them much, but at the end of the day, it's the only way to do it I guess :DDD ( ... )

its_klutzilla February 22 2011, 05:27:31 UTC

Oh and I forgot to add: I positively rolled on the floor when I read the word "Congee" LIKE HOMGAH, THERES SOMEONE OUT THERE N THIS INTERNATIONAL SOCIETY THAT LIKES CONGEE BESIDES ME :DDDDDDD

And wow, my random I con selection gave me a funny looking kibum for the previous comment. Lol.

Thread 11

ext_681672 August 13 2011, 19:53:54 UTC

This fic... scared me. (cowers in fear) LOL no just kidding but seriously. T.T

This is so cynical(?) but yet so awesome!! Though the part where they kill animals is kind of disturbing. And wow the ending is so... creepy and once again it scared me. LOL okay I get scared easily.

Come on Kibum and Dongho, I'll show you what a real game is if you come over to my house right now. HAHAHA.