Story : Prompts # 220 & 221 - Reprieve

Oct 05, 2011 17:45

Two ficlets of 100words,continuing and concluding  - Reprieve - Ghosting Goings On

220 - scream_shriek_shout

He screamed but they didn’t hear.  They came with a shriek of siren, lights flashing.  So many people, with their furrowed brows and curt manner.  Thick jackets protected them from the elements, lips pursed they mourned the unknown boy, they ( Read more... )

author: meep, 221 - scary_new_strange, 220 - scream_shriek_shout, story

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saskia399 October 5 2011, 18:27:18 UTC
Ah! *happy sigh* now my worries flew out of the window with the autumn wind, like woosh!

The witches is a ghost too? *smile* they're happy. He used to yearn for that home? Was he homeless? How did he die? From fear? Oh Gods, I need more now *_* *hopeless puppy look*

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saskia399 October 5 2011, 18:27:33 UTC
SON the witches SON #_#

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mee_eep October 5 2011, 20:12:50 UTC
LOL

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mee_eep October 5 2011, 20:17:54 UTC
:D woosh!

He yearned for A home, yes homeless. From cold, lack of food...
The witch summoned a companion for her son, not necessarily planning a death though.

Nope. This is it. Though I may try another prompt fic ;)

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clodiametelli October 6 2011, 02:27:05 UTC
A sad story - an irony that the fuss and the ambulance came when it was too late to help him. An eerily comforting end though.

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mee_eep October 7 2011, 16:45:03 UTC
Yep people all seem to rush together when it's too late to do any good.

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charisstoma October 6 2011, 03:37:30 UTC
Read the comments. So he cried for help but it didn't come in time.

The whole family of the Witch are ghosts? That would explain why no one heard her call him to follow her and no one questioned her about the dead body near her house. I wonder if even the house is a ghost.

"Winding together in all their ethereal beauty."
I liked that sentence. A nice way to show their growing closener.

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mee_eep October 7 2011, 16:47:24 UTC
It was her son calling him in. *ghostie sounds* but there could well
have been more ghostly goings on ;)

Thanks ^o^

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frogs_of_war October 12 2011, 15:24:25 UTC
Happiness, even in such weird surroundings.

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mee_eep October 12 2011, 23:33:54 UTC
Unexpected destiny :)

*shameface* even my ghostie stories turn fluffy!

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