story: prompt #136 (4 stories one prompt) Magick 2-5

Jul 13, 2011 16:08

Sequel of #079 Magick. Because Charis asked 'how does one volunteer?' Doesn't do right to the original though *headdesk*

Prompt: #136 three of swords
author: saskia399 
word count all stories: 100

Title: volunteer of love magick  (Magick 2)
Master spread the Magick decisively through the room, warming all participants. “Now, you have all experienced the ( Read more... )

136 - image tarot heart and swords, sequel, author: saskia399, story

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mee_eep July 13 2011, 19:20:42 UTC
That Charis is sneaky with plunnying!

I like the revolving heart being healed by the different couples. Sweet for an orgy!!! O.o LOL it's nice and clever, lots of little incidents of love slowly fighting the hurt, good image.

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saskia399 July 13 2011, 19:22:31 UTC
Thank you *relieved* I was a bit worried...

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mee_eep July 13 2011, 19:42:23 UTC
I like how you've made it a room of love not sex. Perhaps its the magick in the room but the couples are seperate and wrapped in each other there's no vouyerism about it.

The different couples both so in love and wanting only to love, their nice alone and add something by comparison.

and this: Together, the heart is strong. Alone, the heart is fragile. Simply put but very, very true. The stories get my vote for that line alone!

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saskia399 July 13 2011, 19:46:43 UTC
*huge grin* Thank you !

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frogs_of_war July 14 2011, 01:35:55 UTC
I agree with Mee_eep: this is about love, not sex. I like this better than the first part.

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saskia399 July 14 2011, 06:14:32 UTC
*huge grin* why thank you *enormous grin*

I didn't even realise it could be called an orgy as I wrote it. Because it wasn't about that ^_^ Like you said

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charisstoma July 14 2011, 06:05:23 UTC
That one plunny resulted in 5 connected drabbles. *grins* It bit you hard.
Loved how this became a larger story telling of the love inside the act of healing; the escalation of affection into full out love. Very nicely done.

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saskia399 July 14 2011, 06:19:25 UTC
Yes thank you. My plunnies like you very much, they bounce extra hard when you're around. Like you're their rainbow jump or something ^_^
*hugs* thanks. Without you, this wouldn't have been written.

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charisstoma July 14 2011, 07:46:32 UTC
*grins* Is that an assigning blame or appreciation? *snickers and runs away*

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saskia399 July 14 2011, 08:26:54 UTC
*grin* both...lots of appreciation when I've got the time to write and assigning blame when I'm pressed for time ^_^

Come back here *runs after you and pulls you into a bear hug*

Erm, bear...@_@ hug....@_@ *ouch* *rubs bite* *headdesk*

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