Selfish

Jun 13, 2011 19:26

Canon: Divergent
Characters/Pairing: Four
Prompts: another way
Rating: K+
Summary: A choice neither brave nor selfless.

He had never thought of himself as fearful. But he feared his father. He had never thought of himself as selfish. He was selfish enough to walk away.

Dauntless.What kind of an Abnegation would bring shame upon his father, the ( Read more... )

.prompt: another way, divergent

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poptartmuse June 14 2011, 20:31:09 UTC
I like this a lot! Four's POV is really nicely done here, he definitely has a lot of inner turmoil going on. good job!!

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scribble_myname June 14 2011, 21:09:29 UTC
Thank you so much. Getting Four's voice is hard. I'd hoped it would work out well.

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asrai26 July 24 2011, 09:28:00 UTC
This is a really great drabble. Loved it.

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scribble_myname July 24 2011, 17:29:27 UTC
Thank you so very much. I'm really liking this universe and am considering writing some more.

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purely_distel September 11 2011, 16:25:40 UTC
Oh great! I crave to "hear" more of Fours voice, and you definitely captured it! My poor bb *hugs him*

great little thing :)

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scribble_myname September 12 2011, 02:53:37 UTC
Thank you! I admit: he's my favorite character.

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