14/2/2014

[nickblackwell]

Canon:Death Note
Characters/Pairing: Misa Amane
Prompt: broken
Rating: Mature Themes
Notes:

It’s been at least a year since he died. Supposedly he’d snuffed the light from at least a hundred lives; the boy whose name meant illumination. She never saw it in him; the urge to kill. Yet she knew from previous experience that violent lives tend to end

Comments

[scribble_myname]

Makes me hurt. Well-done.

[nickblackwell]

Thank you very much. My intention was to make this one as dark as the end of the series itself.

[scherrymouse]

Misa is pretty much my favourite character in Death Note - and I think you capture the darkness in her well, that obsession with Light and Kira.

The heights of happiness/fell part works very well: there's something appropriate about the contrast between the words, the distance between them. Ending with such a short sentence is effective as well. There's a finality about it.

the boy whose name meant illumination

I like the word 'illumination'.

[nickblackwell]

Your word are very much appreciated. The Misa/Light relationship is a favorite of mine as well.