Mm, doesn't fit the latest prompt, but it's still well written. The emotion's there, and it feels real.
Just a minor thing, in English, one usually doesn't put an article in front of 'imagination'. (I don't know how it works in German. I'm just scratching at the surface. :P)
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Just a minor thing, in English, one usually doesn't put an article in front of 'imagination'. (I don't know how it works in German. I'm just scratching at the surface. :P)
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