Rain

[jisatsu90]

She was sitting outside on the stairs, starring at something just she could see. It was raining cats and dogs but it wasn’t bothering her. She didn’t care if she was going to get pneumonia. She wouldn’t mind if she was going to die either. Nobody cared so why should she

Comments

[vegmb]

This captures the emotion beautifully.

[halfbloodme]

Absolutely beautiful, you've captured the emotion perfectly.

[chocolate_daisy]

I like it, I feel bad for the girl...

Some of your sentences don't flow that well, though; you might want to use the comma sometimes=)

[jisatsu90]

@all: Thank you^^

@chocolate_daisy: Nice of you to say that. I always try to improve. Yesterday I asked my Englishteacher about the commas. I think, I'll get an answer tomorrow. I'll add the missing ones then.