Chapter 56

Feb 17, 2010 02:45


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xoxo_qui February 17 2010, 00:37:18 UTC
damn!
Daniel was smooth with it! your pictures speak loudly with and without text!

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goodbye_sun February 17 2010, 14:42:58 UTC
He's had a few decades to practice :P Thank you, I really have to remind myself that in many cases, its better to just skip the text and let the images do the talking.

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penelopethefox February 17 2010, 01:50:15 UTC
This was a beautifully executed chapter. And I'm going to sit here patiently on my hands, waiting for the story to reveal the answers. :D

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goodbye_sun February 17 2010, 14:48:44 UTC
Thank you! I keep trying to be good at doing that, and then the story takes me for another big run somewhere else :P

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goodbye_sun February 17 2010, 14:49:09 UTC
Cheers my dear!

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gloomaphobia February 17 2010, 04:14:05 UTC
It was weird seeing Daniel being all nice to someone for once, but I guess that didn't last very long :)

I really thought Sophie was going to feed from that man. It wouldn't be the first time I was wrong.

I agree with everyone else, the flow of this update was wonderful.

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goodbye_sun February 17 2010, 14:53:12 UTC
His nice always comes at a bit of a price.

That was her intention, but once she really got a good look at him, she just couldn't go through with it. There was just something about him.

Cheers!

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katee412 February 17 2010, 06:04:01 UTC
Wow, this was actually extraordinarily fast paced despite the minimal text. Incredible update!

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goodbye_sun February 17 2010, 14:55:49 UTC
Thanks so much! I was worried it was going to seem a little slow, but I think I just stared at the draft for too long before I figured out what exactly was going to happen :P

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