Chapter 52

[100daysofsorrow]

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[goodbye_sun]

He works hard to be the biggest asshole he can possibly be :)

[goodbye_sun]

And she gets a whole new class of bastard when its just her and Kieran :P

[starling_1]

I love Daniel. He's the only one who seems to have his head on straight, although he has to work at it.

Katia's concern for her sister is astonishing. She's always been A+ at denial, but come on girl! So eerie and unsettling, the way you describe her picking up her sister's pain.

Ok I don't quite understand why Daniel cut Katia's finger. Is is sort of like setting a back fire? To distract Kieran?

The electricity between Katia and Daniel is so powerful, it is absolutely wonderful to read!!

[goodbye_sun]

Sometimes at least.

She still felt responsible for her, it was kind of the one normal thing she had left. I think she knows better now. Thank you!

Its linked back to the reaction Josephine had when she attacked her, but I will explain more on that next time.

There is always a little spark of something that always manages to work its way in no matter if I don't plan for it to be there :)

[crushthecamera]

Oh Daniel, you and your tough love.

I felt nauseous in sympathy with Katia's mouthful of imaginary blood. Ugh. Poor thing.

[goodbye_sun]

He really can't help himself I think.

Even writing it I was a bit put off, I kept having to have big gulps of water :P

[goodbye_sun]

Cheers! They just always push me that way, if they aren't fighting there has to be some other sort of tension ;)

[anonymous]

karen87-i'm late, sorry! Love the way you write the whole Katia feeling Sophie's emotions and feelings. It is superb!

[goodbye_sun]

No worries at all, I know this time of year gets a little hectic for everyone. Thanks Karen!