[Drabble] Make you feel my love {NCIS}

May 20, 2011 18:42

TITLE: Make you feel my love
FANDOM: NCIS
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy

CHARACTER: Jenny Shepard/Trent Kort
GENRE: het, angst
RATING: 
PG-13
WORD COUNT: 
300
SUMMARY: One day he would tell her about all the things he'd done... Written for prompt "Stand by me" for older_not_dead and prompt #223 "Truth" for ncisdrabble100.

WARNING: English still isn't my native language (although I wish ( Read more... )

{community} older_not_dead, {community} ncisdrabble100, {feature} jenny_trent, {format} drabble, {feature} jenny shepard, {feature} trent kort

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alidiabin May 21 2011, 07:11:34 UTC
Cool fic. For some reason I like Kort and Jenny as a pairing.

My only irk is the formatting I know it's a lot of dialouge but I think for some people it may be easier to read if there was a gap between each line of conversation.

Otherwise, it was really good. You really wrote Kort well.

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nicis_anatomy May 21 2011, 09:19:08 UTC
I prefer to format my stories like they do it in the books (without the extra space), but I can see your point and I will try to change it next time.

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it. Jenny/Kort is one of my favorite pairings. I love the idea of them together ;)

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nakeisha May 21 2011, 09:45:03 UTC
Very good and moving.

I'm really glad to see you're writing this pairing again.

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nicis_anatomy May 21 2011, 17:26:15 UTC
Thank you, Nikki!! I think my muse is finally back so I'm trying to do my best to keep her here.

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nakeisha May 23 2011, 12:10:29 UTC
So I see - which is excellent news.

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nicis_anatomy May 23 2011, 18:17:19 UTC
I know, right ;) Hope she will stay for a long, long time.

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karaokegal June 1 2011, 05:10:39 UTC
Great pairing! I love bad-ass Trent, and I feel like Jenny got a bum deal plot-wise, so I'm just as happy for to be getting some with Trent. Plus I love the darkness and angst.

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nicis_anatomy June 2 2011, 08:01:44 UTC
Thank you very much! I love this unlikely pairing so much and I always try to find excuses why it could've worked.

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