[Drabble] 3 Drabble {Lost}

[nicis_anatomy]

TITLE: Wrapped around her finger
FANDOM: Lost
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy

CHARACTER: Jack Shephard / Juliet Carlson
GENRE: het
RATING: 
PG
WORD COUNT: 200 

SUMMARY: Jack shifted uncomfortably in his seat ... Written for prompt #18 "Writer's choice" for the 20in20 challenge at lost_land.

WARNING: English still isn't my native language (although I wish) and the story

Comments

[nighttiming1022]

Just went through and read them all, and loved every single one of them, but I really loved this nursery drabble. It was, to me, exactly how Jacket moments seemed to work out. A very sweet, caring moment but underlying all of that is this emotional turmoil and angst keep them apart too. But, it was so great to read nice fluffy moments from their life together. I don't think anyone but you writes them that way (even in the sideways!)

Fabulous drabbles Nici!

[nicis_anatomy]

Oh, wow. Thank you so much!! Reading these kind of feedback really makes me day. And it helps a lot to keep my muse here with me. I hope I can write more Jacket soon. It's so much fun to write them and I was so sad when I couldn't finish the schmoop_bingo card :( But I'm back and I hope I can write lots of stories more.

Thank you for reading and for your nice words! *husg*

[whatismuch]

Congrats on finishing all the drabbles, Nici! *thumbs up*
J/J is not my cup of tea, but I like your writing so I'll check out a few of them tomorrow because I'm curious. :)

[nicis_anatomy]

Thank you, Fran! It was hard work but I'm so happy my muse behaved and stayed with me until the very end. It was fun.

I know it's not your favourite pairing but I love you for checking my stuff out anyway. It means a lot to me.

[pann_cake]

Loved these three as well! It's good to see Richard making an appearance again. I'd be nervous to date him too if I was Rachel...he's just so pretty lol. XD

Love the nursery one too, that Jack is haunted of these dreams maybe because of the guilt he felt on the island. :( And I really like the image of preggers Juliet in the chair. <3

And the last one is just so lovely! I always wondered how them remembering would effect their past together, how they would feel about being married and having a child together now that they have James and Kate. But this was just so perfect, how at peace they are. <333

Great job on everything, Nici!!

[nicis_anatomy]

I would be so intimidated ;) He's just too good looking to be true ;)

I had a hard time writing the nursery drabble and I'm really happy that everyone seems to like it. It means a lot to me, and I love the idea of pregnant!Juliet spending her nights in the nursery. And Jack ... well, he always ends up with these dreams and insecurity when I write him. Poor guy ... lol

The last one was something I wanted to write for a while now. I always wondered how they lived with these changes. Especially since we don't even know if David really existed and what happened to him :(

Glad you liked them. Thank you very much!!! And I will try to read your stories over the weekend. I wanted to today, but I worked 11 hours and only got home an hour ago. Now it's already bedtime :( But the weekend is near ...

[pann_cake]

But I love how you write, it fits so well with his sideways life. <3 I just loved how Jack and Juliet interacted in the finale. The whole "Doctor..." "Doctor." thing was so cute! They seem to have a great relationship after the divorce, and your fics really support that, that they're friends too and can make it work even if the marriage didn't work out. :D

As for David, I like to think he still exists (at least I hope!) and that they get to keep living their sideways lives even after remembering.

Don't worry hun, I know there is a lot to read (I took your advice and limited myself after a while, so most of them are shorter now). And, since I know you're not a slash fan, the only one that's really slashy is the Jack/Sawyer. The rest I wrote to also be seen as friendship (there's a Richard/Miles one that's rated R but only because I couldn't keep Miles from swearing, lol). So I hope you like them anyway. :P

[nicis_anatomy]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you find it believable.