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[Drabble] 2 Drabble {Lost}

May 16, 2011 20:12

TITLE: One life
FANDOM: Lost
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
 CHARACTER: Jack Shephard / Juliet Carlson
GENRE: het
RATING:  PG
WORD COUNT: 100  
SUMMARY: It was just too good to be true. ... Written for prompt #16 "Writer's choice" for the 20in20 challenge at lost_land.
 WARNING: English still isn't my native language (although I wish) and the story is not beta'd. Spoiler ( Read more... )

{fandom} lost, {format} drabble, {community} 100_tales, {feature} juliet burke, {feature} juliet_jack, {feature} jack shephard, {feature} david shephard, {community} lost_land

Comments 5

pann_cake May 16 2011, 20:08:24 UTC

Awww, Jack. I love him in both of these! The second one especially is really cute. I love all these little snippets of their life!

It's good to see you writing these two again. <3

nicis_anatomy May 17 2011, 16:54:28 UTC

Thank you!!! It is fun writing them again. I really missed it. And this challenge was a great opportunity to get back into Jacket. Three more to go and I have no idea what to write lol Any ideas/wishes?
Well, there's still some time left ...

pann_cake May 17 2011, 17:37:28 UTC

I actually have to go back and read the rest, I'm behind. :3 I've been trying to get mine done too, but I wasn't smart like you and limiting the word count. XDD I'm about halfway done, so for the rest I'm trying not to go over 200.

Did you do any about their wedding yet? Or David being born? Or any interactions with Rachel and Richard? :DDD

nicis_anatomy May 17 2011, 18:50:59 UTC

I had to limit my word count after the schmoop_bingo disaster last year ;) Hope you will manage to finish yours.

I wrote about the wedding and mentioned David a few times (but not the birth - I should do that). Rachel and Richard were mentioned but not really featured since I have to focus on Jack/Juliet. But maybe I can make it work.
Thank you ;)

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nicis_anatomy August 27 2011, 12:12:31 UTC

There should've been baby David on the show as well ;)
Thank you for reading and for your review!!